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Stan Rice poemLock

  • just mercedes
    on Nov 25 2011 01:37 PM
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    One I like very much - what do you think of it?

     

     

    Psalm 161

     

    I heard my first mandolin

    on the Victrola. Then my sister

    walked into the pasture

    and was wed. Lord, why do you

    keep me on the phone until

    I am deaf. There comes a day

    when the mandolin must be put

    in the mountains.

    In search of a better life

    valleys inspire conflagrations in autumn.

    Rosy the dirt is.

    My heart lies down in it.

    I'm kind of speechless.

    It takes my breath, the hammered dulcimer

    left out to be beaten by rain.

    Can anything clothe the dreamstate

    and keep the hopelessness in.

    Have I heard my last mandolin.

                                                             Selah.

     

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