Hi all!! I'm on here to get some feedback on my writing, and hopefully meet some like minded people.
I am twenty years old from london.
left school with no grades, (too busy getting into trouble, ha) but quickly learnt the error of my ways.
I'm an easy going person, who's friendly to all.
I've been practising writing for just over a year now, but I have no one to read my work and tell me if its any good, so please, be fair, but gentle, I'm only a beginner.
I'm a very honest person, brutally sometimes, and find that i HATE liars.
My main goal is to write a series of books, comparable in size and scope to some of the greats like harry potter, the farseer trilogies, and lord of the rings. (yeah, i wish) well nothing is impossible!
all i know is from what I have taught myself, so i know there are things that i need help with.
so please, if you have any comments let me know, all are welcome. THANKS , , , , ,
Here's something I stole from another profile
I cdnuolt blveiee taht I cluod aulaclty uesdnatnrd waht I was rdanieg. The phaonmneal pweor of the hmuan mnid, aoccdrnig to a rscheearch at Cmabrigde Uinervtisy, it dseno't mtaetr in waht oerdr the ltteres in a wrod are, the olny iproamtnt tihng is taht the frsit and lsat ltteer be in the rghit pclae. The rset can be a taotl mses and you can sitll raed it whotuit a pboerlm. Tihs is bcuseae the huamn mnid deos not raed ervey lteter by istlef, but the wrod as a wlohe. Azanmig huh? yaeh and I awlyas tghuhot slpeling was ipmorantt!
fi yuo cna raed tihs, palce it in yuor porfiel
I am twenty years old from london.
left school with no grades, (too busy getting into trouble, ha) but quickly learnt the error of my ways.
I'm an easy going person, who's friendly to all.
I've been practising writing for just over a year now, but I have no one to read my work and tell me if its any good, so please, be fair, but gentle, I'm only a beginner.
I'm a very honest person, brutally sometimes, and find that i HATE liars.
My main goal is to write a series of books, comparable in size and scope to some of the greats like harry potter, the farseer trilogies, and lord of the rings. (yeah, i wish) well nothing is impossible!
all i know is from what I have taught myself, so i know there are things that i need help with.
so please, if you have any comments let me know, all are welcome. THANKS , , , , ,
Here's something I stole from another profile

I cdnuolt blveiee taht I cluod aulaclty uesdnatnrd waht I was rdanieg. The phaonmneal pweor of the hmuan mnid, aoccdrnig to a rscheearch at Cmabrigde Uinervtisy, it dseno't mtaetr in waht oerdr the ltteres in a wrod are, the olny iproamtnt tihng is taht the frsit and lsat ltteer be in the rghit pclae. The rset can be a taotl mses and you can sitll raed it whotuit a pboerlm. Tihs is bcuseae the huamn mnid deos not raed ervey lteter by istlef, but the wrod as a wlohe. Azanmig huh? yaeh and I awlyas tghuhot slpeling was ipmorantt!
fi yuo cna raed tihs, palce it in yuor porfiel
- Last seen 9 hours ago. Member since June 16, 2008.
- I am a 20 year old man (United Kingdom)
- When I'm not writing, I'm being lazy.












- I am in the groups Fantasy Gurlz, The Editors Corner, The Science Fiction and Fantasy Writer, Writing 101
- I have 94 comments, 2 contests, 31 stories
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It wasn’t until the sun had withdrawn its light, hiding behind tall trees, that Balion heard the sound of footsteps and hushed voices outside the cottage door.1
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I look down at the paper sitting before me, blank but for the few words written so far. It’s a lot harder than I first thought documenting
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Roughly twenty leagues from were the young man had settled in for the night, Caius, the Summoner at the Dark Tower, was pacing up and down
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Moving carefully so as not to show just how nervous he was. Balion made his way to the Barons keep, navigating the wind swept streets with1500 words, 21 comments, June 17, 2008. In Fantasy
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As he stood, looking out the window onto the scenery surrounding his secluded home, Balion felt foreboding creeping up on him. He wondered,
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As he stood, looking out the window onto the scenery surrounding his secluded home, Balion felt foreboding creeping up on him. He wondered,2600 words, 15 comments, May 14
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I want to rant about writing. It seems to me that every time I get a review or comment from another aspiring writer they are over critical
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Bleed-To-Feel on August 23PEACE!
I have now officially invaded your guestbook! Now I will never leave...Except when I get tired...and maybe hungry...and maybe kicked off the computer...Then I might leave. XD
Anyways, your profile is still awesome.
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Oddems. on January 9Ok, so I'm officially worried now.
Haven't talked to you in weeks....did ya have to get the surgery or something? Well, when you get back on, you should message me.
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Oddems. on July 19, 2008Hi Tony! Haven't talked to you in ages!!
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NinjaMegami : You're... on June 20, 2008You're in my group!

