Tonialoise• Show stories

I am older than most younger than some. I've been writing for many many years and maybe one day I'll be brave enough to submit my book for publication.

I used to be an engineer so you will find me fairly detail orientated and logical. So much so that sometimes I can't turn off my brain and enjoy a story for what it is. If I find mistakes or seem a little harsh in a comment to you, believe me, it's nothing personal, it's the engineer in me.

I do have a creative side, hence why I love to write. My imagination can soar at times. I use writing to escape the real world. In those other worlds I can be as smart, witty and strong as I like.

I mostly write Science Fiction and Fantasy but am starting to branch out into other genres. I love to discuss my stories so leave me a comment or drop me a line.


Oh and if you can't tell; I love green! Dragons and dogs are my current obsession.




I have several stories on here the most prominent is Leaving the Light:

This is the story about Antoniette Aloise, made a slave to vampires she falls in love with one of her captors. She of course is not content with her situation but must adapt to survive. Follow her life story through joy and grief, intrigue and torture, death and life, love and hate, and of course blood.

Visit the Leaving the Light Forum to chat with other fans
http://xsorbit30.com/users5/leavingthelight/index.php

I started off with a full episode then started posting smaller more digestible chunks. If you're new to the story it would be in your best interest to start with Episode 1.

The rest are random stories I wrote for contests or you can visit my homepage to read my older stories.

I welcome all comments and critiques with an open heart and mind.