Guestbook entries for onaya3

ONAYA!!! is been so long!! XD my pc is finally fix XD yayyyyy! now i can continued writing, but I have to start from chapter 3 T_T lucky me i HAVE THE PROLUGUE AND 2 CHAPTERS here or I would have had to write them tooo (in case, i'm talking about Song's of an Angel). But besides that, how you been doing and hows the story going, did you manage to solve the CC problem??

I'm a trek fan and i want more stories as i nearly read all on write.com. and i must say i am addicted to your writing and may have to pay alot to get circulate!!! lol And i hug you back onaya3

Just was wondering... how ARE those conversations with your characters? Quiet interesting, I imagine?

Nice page...but, it was too long. Only kidding! We have some things in common and some groups the same..weird huh? See you around.

I scimmed over your page and I see that you have other interests besides werewolves. I'm afraid that I probably like cannibals best at the moment. I don't know if it's a passing fad or not.

I think that you'll enjoy Storywrite. There are quite a few Aussies here.

Andy

I'm a Trek fan, too! Yea!!! I'm going to check out some of your writing on NOP. Have a good day!

I love Sororate! it felt real how their relationship went up and down. these novels are really cool and I would buy them once I got the cash.lol

I love Scent ! I felt so sorry for them both . i glad she ended up with Declan!

heyy onaya. its me again. guess wat? they r making a new narnia movie in queensland! YAY! PS. I joined writing.com.

I pray your world will support your reality forever.

blueraven6, RET.
PROJECT BLUELIGHT

Hi! I love narnia too! Great stories! I haven't heard of Writers.com, but I'll be sure to check it out and probably join! Keep writing!

-Narnia's BIGGEST fan/Crystal

I love Small Fry! it is totally great and i also love the idea of it being set in the future. you have changed my ideas of werewolves for good. lol

I started out on Writers.com also, but love this so much, I haven't checked back in lately. I'll have to do that soon.
Welcome to StoryWrite.
Trish

when is chapter 3 of Small Fry coming out? I can't wait for it!!! I'm so addicted to it already!!!

Actually I am asthmatic. Sucks to be one too.

They be burning my eyes!

please when are you going to put more about Sororate* giggle* that last chapter you posted there let me all ansienced( think i wrote it wrong) pleaseee! post chapeter 18 XD

You are a talented writer and I want everyone here to know it. I've read sororante and scent and I must say I'm impressed how you can write in such an affective manner. In Scent you allowed your characters to develop slowly and beautifully. For long stretches therewas little action but the story held the audience because the characters felt so real.
In sororante there's less development and a lot more action. Again the characters feel real and your action sequences contain just the right amount of detail to portray the images you have in mind. So often when i'm writing a fight sequence I struggle because I let it get to complicated. Yours are perfect.

ive noticethat you skip alot of chapters and you leave us hanging cuz you dont finsh it

You're quite industrious, aren't you?

I know how you got these up so fast and creatively you've must of had them on your other story page. welcome to storywrite.

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