A Screaming Love Story

A Screaming Love Story
By: The Red Cat Jazz of Love1

My feet of Costa Rica lands upon your world of pure infatuation and I am feeling I am roaming a new territory so unknown, but I am curious and ready to be free. I embraced you with a joy I never felt before and you step away observing me over, with the sight of completion, as your still drinking me in like it was your first time seeing me. I missed you so much and I stayed away from you as if I was a stranger, but I am a stranger trying to get to know another.2

I walk back up to connect my clothed flesh to yours and embrace your hands in my gentle palms and I start kissing you all over. You laughed with the coolness of sands and you picked up my luggage of a long flight because I am very exhausted. I have Fredrick Hollywood in my eyes as I am very impatient waiting on the dinner that will engage our love and flames of a screaming heated love story. I love you so dangerously and with full of deep salacious bonding I am screaming to release honey of pleasures that I have been wasting on my fingers for months.3

I am day dreaming now to just get a quick sample of your navy beans with a slice of butter corn bread as my lust is impatient for the long time of going UN feed. I lay my head on your chest of love and your heart is feeding me the drums of your precious heart beating me in to Salamanca such a beautiful place out in Spain. We arguing for a whole week drove me insane. I have a screaming love story how I am use to hearing your voice as the clouds getting out of the way for the sun to shine so bright for me. Your hands stroking my hair for the delusional moment feel so right to me. Everything you’re I am dreaming just please embrace me, and treat me right. A screaming love story this came to be because our flames burned out and now our new love is on another flight. 4


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  • Ms Sexy
    April 1, 2008

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    continue already, ma. You got me all ready to read and i only got a little to read Damn. Can't wait for part 2


    • theredcatjazzoflove
      September 1, 2008
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      wow you came over here and read this crap lol oh m thanks Sexy you do love me i am going to so check for mis spellings

  • darell
    August 1, 2007

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    Deliciously decadent!

    Mmm babe. I will start with those delicious
    fingers that are soaked in your honey juices.
    Sucking them one by one. yess! all ten taste
    so divine. Making me throb and pulsate with
    a migrane penis headache. I need the tylenol
    of your sweet choochie to soothe my budding
    stem. Let me go all up in your flower and
    spray you with my gems. Hold on sweetheart
    as my pulse starts to race.
    I'm about to rock you baby until
    you cum cum cumm!
    This was so romantic baby. I love the entire
    premise for which you wrote this beautiful
    story. Your imagination blends well with my
    creative mind. We need to get this fucking
    party started and make our own fermenting
    wine. Let's get drunk on each others love
    under the yum yum tree. As we bathe in the
    splender of love while the waves dance and
    the wind blow with ease.
    Excellent work!

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.

  • kennethlaney
    July 30, 2007

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    Very good

    Now come to Miami and see me GIRL FRIEND! I Missed you last night dealing with family issues.(and sleep) Anyone following our poetry is getting a pretty good "SOAP OPERA"
    I don't give a shit thou! I'll send you an
    e-mail or some thing with the list of the other poems written for you, there is about 10 or so more! didn' count them yet.
    You know I love you baby, but you also know it's time for a smoke break! BE RIGHT BACK. When I think of you I can't help but smile!
    "BOO"
    You bring light to my darkest hours!

  • Brazos
    July 28, 2007

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    Well done so far, Julia

    I see [and read] a deeply passionate love story, inspired by love lost. Probably the argument was about something trivial, as most love arguments are, but neither of you would give in, letting pride rule your judgements instead of love. And so the lovers split up, but still feel the love and the desire everyday.

    "I am screaming to release honey of pleasures that I have been wasting on my fingers for months."

    Yeah, that's it, instead of compromising and being together, we waste the love on our fingers, why is that? Why just dream about it, when you can have it all? If just a mere embrace can start your juices flowing, other things can be patched up.

    Please continue with this story, Julia, I am looking forward to where you go with the rest of it. It can have happy ending or a sad one, or something in between. I don't care, I would just like to see where it goes.

    I really like what you've written so far.

    Love you baby,
    B.

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