You put your razor next to my shower poof.
It is to close.
If I want to use my poof I have to move your razor to get it. I'm not saying that it is a bad thing you moved in and put your razor there. I like that you keep your razor in the shower, it's just that I wish . . . I wish you would give my shower poof a little more space.
Author notes
Ok, so who can guess what this is really about?
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Hahahahha shower poof XD Nice!!
Um, honestly, I have no idea what it's about, but as a guess, I think it's about someone moving in and becoming way too comfortable, too quickly, and overstepping lots of boundaries. -
My guess
I may be way off on this but heres my guess.
Someone has moved in and what you need is more private time and space to yourself. You like having that person there but now there is not enough room to express who you are.
Maybe you're going somewhere else with this and I have over analyzed it but thats my guess -
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Why do we play these games? Anybody want to write something? I mean, how constructive, instructive and amusing...how interesting and compelling can free association and endless stream of consciousness be? Think about it. It's ho-humm to the nth degree.
And, 8 (may I call you 8?) "Too" is not spelled "To." (In this case)
Ho-hum. (I think you could do better) -
Hmm, my guess is that it is about a new relationship, but it could be just because you really want the poof to have a little more space!
Nice little piece of micro-fiction! -
Hi, Congrats on a really neat little story.
Small correction-'to close' should be spelt too close.
I realy liked it. -
AHHHH!
Rotfl I LOVE IT! THat is so brilliant and plainly put. It makes me think of a new couple or new college room mates. ANd yes, "poof" is just a great word. =D
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AND THE ANSWER IS: SEX!
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I looked at this.. for about ten minutes. I read it again and again.... for the life of me, even though I should be able to think of more, all I can think of for the meaning is someone saying "Give my dog some space." That is so not right.
I laughed because your tone was very laid back, and of course... using the word poof is just funky.
Good stuff....
but you should tell me what it means, just so i don't go insane, lol.
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ha. that was funny.
(is it about sharing a bed with someone?)
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