Walking through the shadows of the unknown,
never sure of where we shall end up.
The truth in life sometimes never shown,
feeling as helpless as a new born pup.
Onward we travel; heads held high,
trying to have courage in our soul.
Our dreams we never deny,
while secrets in our hearts are never told.
Never looking back to our past,
for there is nothing there we need.
Memories in the mind never last,
we have now planted our fate's seed.
Alone we face life's confusing game,
holding onto who we are without any shame.
A contest entry
- Poems Please ENTER ALL! by Taylor Renee.
450 points, ended July 30, 2007, 19 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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this flowed, rhymed and sounded great!
deep and meaningful... always a good thing when writing.
i think the last two lines were okay, but if you ended it in the same style and flow as the rest it would've sounded and ended better: but thats just my opinion.
great write, i really enjoyed this! -
This is very good. I love alone we face life's confusing game... it's just too good. Great use of words, great rhyming!
Good Job! -
This was really great.
I loved it. It was written beautifully, and the meaning was huge.
You did a terrific job with this, perfect entry. Great job!
Thank you so much for entering my ontest, good luck and great entry!
xoxo
Tay
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