that would be over- poem/ lyrics by mwahh ^^

That would be over

I'm always honest

Never so simple

I keep pretending

That it's so over

But when it' s over

it's to descending

Trying to breath again

I get used to the way

I torn to astray

living like I'm dead

That would be over

this would be dead

like thousands of tears

like blood that falls from my bed

like millions of achers of dreams

I make up in my head

tell me you don't love me

I'll die here alone instead

that would be over...

I'm always lying

Always so easy

I keep screaming

That it's so over

But when it' s over

it's still dreaming

Trying to breath again

That would be over

this would be dead

like thousands of tears

like blood that falls from my bed

like millions of achers of dreams

I make up in my head

tell me you don't love me

I'll die here alone instead

that would be over...

Please don't leave me broken

Your already dead

Please don't leave me chocking

Burn inside your head

Please don't say those tantrums

Your making no sense

Just one last vampire kiss

that would be over

that would ve over

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  • Bello.Midnight
    September 23, 2008

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    ♣ Blake

    A lot of grammar and punctuation errors hun.
    But over all an intersting read !!!

    ♣ Blake