Sure, leave me alone
Throw me away
It's not like you'll get hurt
I'll get over it some day
Sure, tie me down
Tell me to go which way
It's not like you care
I'll soon break away1
Author notes
Well, this is something I just (only just) cooked up... I guess I wanted to write a hope driven poem instead of all the depressing poems i usually write... Plus hope means a lot to me too... I also wanna break away and get over it!!!!
Anyways... I'm a ballerina
*shrugs*
Now that that's over with.... *sighs*
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A contest entry
- Poems Please ENTER ALL! by Taylor Renee.
450 points, ended July 30, 2007, 19 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I love how you can convey all that feeling in such a short poem!
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This poem made me feel confident at the time that I read it. So many people try to tell me what to do about my life, where to go and who to follow. Though I never argue, I never feel right about staying in the boundaries set for me. That's why I am trying to turn everything around and think with my mind. Be independent. This poem is so inspiring right now. Good job!
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This was so sad!
I really loved it though. It was beautiful and the emotions in it were great
You did a fantastic job, I didn't know you could write poems! Well, at least, I didn't rmemeber
This was really great though!
thank you so much for entering my contest, good luck and great write!
xoxo
Tay
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