Moo-Moo
Come to me
Let me get
Your delicious delicacies
Yummy
In my tummy
Beautiful it is
Until it’s crumbly
Author notes
Well... the first time I wrote this it was much better, but it was 21 words :| Oh wells, I tried!
A contest entry
- 20 Crafted Beauties by Asfand.
200 points, ended August 3, 2007, 16 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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nicely done and simply humourus.....
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I'd like to read the original... It sounds funny and nostalgic... reminding me of my childhood about toffees, *I hate toffees but still, it reminds me of when i was a kid*
Good Job! -
Yay, you entered the same contest as me (I'm so going to kick your butt though) lol
This was really cute. I'm guessing it was about eating milk and cookies? -
it says 19 words but i counted 20... lol
Anyway, I'd say this was really cute and funny. I reckon Moo-Moo must be some kind of milk... or cake? lol... yeah. Really cute... especially the way you've blended it with the background
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I think it's cute and funny. Good luck in the contest.
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