The Weird Worlds of Kasey, Alli and I (part 1)

"One time I threw the cat across the room, and my mom just got up and left me there." I said to Kasey as we were walking to the park. Amanda had come with us but she wasn't really talking, I don't really know why. "Oh my god. I almost did the same thing but you know me, nobody walks out on me, it's just some universal thing or something." Kasey blabbed away. I wasn't really listening to her, but that's okay she doesn't need to really know that does she?1

Amanda all of a sudden started to sing, "Oops I did it again." by Britney Spears. Kasey and I looked at her like she had three heads. "What! Isn't a girl allowed to sing?!" We just looked at her funny, and started walking to the swing set. All of a sudden we run into three guys Norbert,Vincent and Rex. Kasey screamed, "Vincent! I didn't think you were going to come!" she hugged him. I wasn't really watching what Kasey and Vincent were doing,because Amanda was freaking me out. She ran up to Rex and started hugging him and screaming, acting a little like a ditz (if you know what I mean).  I looked at Norbert just stunned that he was here. He came up to me and waved his hands in front of my face, "Earth to Lynne, HELLO! Lynne! Aren't you going to hug me like they did?!" 2

"Why would I want to hug you?" I said. He acted as if he was crestfallen. "Oh....I...I....I..." He said pretending he was about to cry. He fell on his knees and put his hands out like he was worshipping me. "Oh mighty Lynnne, please forgive me for being such a conceited person." He said in a worshipping type of way Kasey started laughing her head off; she fell over Vincent catching her just in tiem before she hit her head on the wood. 3

"Oh my god! That was so freaking funny!" Kasey laughed. Everyone looked at her like she was a retard, but she couldn't help laughing and laughing. I started to laugh as well, I fell over so I could only see the grass and hear Kasey laughing. I could tell that Amanda was trying not to laugh, because Rex was there, but her mouth was faster then her brain. She laughed so hard; she fell over and was rolling towards me. I know Kasey would've been right beside us if Vincent weren't holding her. All of a sudden out of nowhere Alli and Sam show up through the woods, from their grandmother's house and over the river. Norbert started singing "Over the river and through the woods to grandmother's house we go." Vincent finished it for him. "The horse knows the way to carry sleigh and around and around we go." Kasey started laughing yet again. "Can you please start laughing?!" Rex yelled. Everyone howled with laughter at what Rex just said. 4

"WHAT?!" Amanda whispered what he said in his ear, and he started to laugh as well. Sam jumped into the conversation saying, "Okay since were pretty much done laughing can we go now?" We all looked at him in a where-are-we-supposed-to-go look. "Ok then never mind" He said sitting next to Alli on the hell. 5

"Okay now that Kasey is done laughing. I think we can actually talk about something worthwhile." Vincent said, which made Kasey laugh even more. "You KNEW she would laugh at that." Alli said. Vincent started whispering to Kasey who all of a sudden stopped laughing and grinned ear-to-ear.6

"Okay then, I think we got that straightened out." I said, "now all we have to do is figure out what we're going to do with the rest of the day." Kasey looked at her watch. "It's around six." Amanda looked at her, "SIX?!" She looked at her own watch. "Kasey...I think you've been laughing a little too much, because it's only 7

TWELVE!" Kasey looked at her watch again, and started laughing. Vincent puts his hand over her mouth.8

"Well then, I guess we have plenty of time to do whatever we want." I said.  "Yes I believe we do." Norbert grinned at me in a flirtatious way. Kasey looked over at Norbert and started laughing in Vincent's hand, which was still over her mouth; she liked the taste of it.9

"NORBERT YOU PERVERT!" yelled Amanda, Rex, Alli and Sam in unison. Norbert and Vincent were both grinning ear-to-ear. Norbert because they called him a pervert, and Vincent because Kasey just said something in his ear, no one noticed Kasey doing it though.10

"What are you two smiling about?!" I asked. Norbert was like, "Oh I think you know." Vincent was just a silent little boy grinning ear to ear still. I shook my head. "I wonder about you two." Which made Kasey laugh and grab Vincent's arm yelling behind her. "I know a perfect place to go!" To everyone else. Of course nobody knew what to do so we just followed the Vincent being dragged by Kasey. They got to the hill near the football field; Kasey and Vincent laid down on the grass, then Kasey toppled over and started rolling over and over and over until she got to the end of the hill, which made her DISSAPPEAR!  Rex followed Vincent, not realizing that Kasey had just dissappeared. Amanda followed Res, Alli followed Amanda, I followed Alli, and Norbert followed me. Sam, who was the last person at the top of the hill by now said. "OH CRUD! I'm going to have to follow these damn American people aren't I?!" Who then followed Norbert. When Sam got where everyone else was, Alli screamed. "I HEARD THAT!"11

Author notes

I was going to  put this under Young Adult,because some of it...is something that should be under Young Adult...maybe even Adult..but my friends and I wrote this in 7th grade when we were a young adult...soooo...might as well right?! But I can't because...I don't know how to make it under two things.

Oh and to all who wrote this on here. (Alli) I changed the names from what we had them before, because we changed them and I knew that everyone would want to change them again...so I just used this one. Hope it's cool with you.

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  • Pusher
    June 6, 2006
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    Interesting

    I'm not sure if I understand this properly or not...did this actually happen or...what? Either way it's pretty well written and certainly kept me reading till the end. Your style shines through it all of course, hope to talk to you soon.

    (pusher)

    beginning: 4, language: 3, plot: 2, ending: 3, dialog: 2, characters: 3.

    • KaseyL
      November 27, 2006
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      Thank you for the comment...even though it was on June 6th, I never recieved it. Oopsies.. No, this never happened.

      It was just my friend and I decided to write a story..we put it in first person and she is the "first person"..soo if you keep reading on to it, you'll notice how first person is not so great if you do not have the insight of the person it is based on.

  • Ilati Aza
    June 6, 2006
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    I totally forgot about this!!

  • KaseyL
    October 27, 2004
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    lol. This wasn't one of our good pieces, we just randomly wrote it. We were very hyper and we decided. HEY WHY DONT WE WRITE A STORY?! It started out, with Lynne and I (Lynne is the 1st person as you will find out later..maybe you do now I don't remember lol.) and I was just the random annoying one, as it shows you here. We just wrote the first part, and then my friends Amanda and Alli came over and Lynne, Alli, Amanda and I all wrote the rest of the stories. Yup. Thanks so much for liking it though.

  • invested
    October 27, 2004
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    I don't normally read stories on here because they just take a long time to read and i have trouble sitting still through something...bit I figured I might as well try this one out, the title seemed fairly good.
    What I liked about this was the way it captured childhood and childhood conversations. I've been trying to write a bit about younger days myself and have been having some trouble, so when I saw this, which captured things very well I found it quite impressive.
    The story line dind't seem too contain too much but it is the first part so...
    Anyways good job with this, excellent dialogue, veyr good for seventh grade

  • IceDrgn4
    August 15, 2004
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    Cool. Where'd Kasey go??? CLIFF HANGER ALERT!!! I like story's with freands who go on adventures, but then again, who doesn't?
    My favorite line "OH CRUD! I'm going to have to follow these damn American people aren't I?!" That one cracked me up. Really good work for 7th graders.

  • KaseyL
    August 13, 2004
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    YAY it made you laugh!!!!!! That was the plan....I really like the colors in this, but I keep on forgetting which colors they are *sigh*

  • RainyLullaby
    August 13, 2004
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    lol, that was a great beggining Kasey. I also have to read the middle and end but no time now, will read later. Awesome job. that made me laugh quite a bit!

    ~Kristin

  • KaseyL
    August 1, 2004
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    lol!!!!! I'm going to...I think I'll put up the second part right now...I mean...I'm typing it on the laptop from the big computer...and ya.

  • Ilati Aza
    August 1, 2004
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    Yeah, fine, just change the ones you didn't change, like Charlie, and such. Put it on Microsoft word and hit ctrl H and thhen type in what you want to change. Anyways I remeber this fucked up piece of shit, it's hilarious, PUT THE REST OF THE DAMN STRY BIATCH!!! lol lylas

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