NOT WHAT IT SEEMS1
This Geography field trip was turning out to be a disaster! As usual,2
because Andrew Holt's name came after Heather Holsworth's in the class3
register, she was stuck with him as her partner. She might as well be4
working on her own.5
"The work you do today will affect your overall grade. I want both6
partners to contribute or else I'll fail you both. And this means you Mr.7
Holt!" Mr. Barker shouted, like an army sergeant does to his troops before battle. Andrew and Heather groaned.8
"Oh dear. Looks like a fail for you." Heather's best friend Kara patted9
her sympathetically on the shoulder.10
"Gee thanks," Heather rolled her eyes and walked over to Andrew who was11
sprawled across a large rock by the river. He was dressed in his usual12
black biker attire, complete with chains and spikes and of course, the13
trademark green hair. She reluctantly approached him.14
"Um. shall we go and find a spot along the river to start our project?"15
She asked him, hesitantly. Andrew snickered to his friends.16
"Yeah OK, you just go and do that while I wait right here," he sneered.17
"But Mr. Barker said that it's supposed to be a joint effort." Heather18
protested.19
"But Mr. Barker said." Andrew mimicked her, "whatever."20
Heather stomped off and found an isolated spot along the river.21
"What a retard." She mumbled to herself, "it's so unfair! Why should I22
fail Geography because of him?"23
On numerous occasions she had complained to Mr. Barker about her Geography partner but he always fobbed her off.24
The project aim was to observe the flow of the river. Heather didn't have25
a clue as to how she was going to manage this on her own. There had to be26
two people; one to place an orange in the water at a certain point and one to time how long it took to get to the other side and to catch it. Sighing, Heather waded into the river, attempting to do the best that she could.27
"And where is Mr. Holt?" Mr. Barker's voice boomed behind her.28
"Er. Sir, he's being uncooperative and I really don't get on well with him anyway."29
"Are we in primary school? Can we not act more like adults and stop this30
childish behaviour and work together?"31
Heather frowned. She was becoming tired of Mr. Barker's incredibly32
patronising tone. He abruptly left her alone and then shortly returned with a very grumpy Andrew.33
"Now come on, work, work, work!" Mr. Barker clapped his hands and moved on to the next group. Andrew stuck his middle finger up at him and then made a gun motion with his hands.34
"BANG!" He laughed evilly, "Alright. he's gone. See ya later babe, I'm due for a smoke." And with that Andrew advanced into the nearby woods. Heather clasped her head into her hands in despair.35
"Kara!" She called to her friend, "can you just please watch my things. I36
have to go and find Andrew." 37
Kara nodded sympathetically as Heather followed Andrew further and further into the woods. She saw him light up a cigarette in the distance and put it to his lips.38
"Hey!" Heather shouted, "look, I really don't want to fail and I think39
that you could do without another failed subject."40
Andrew smirked and blew smoke into Heather's face. 'What a caveman', she41
thought, disgusted, 'geez. A chimp has more sense than this guy.' Heather42
bit her lip, "oookay, let's start again."43
"Look Miss Goody-Two-Shoes, stop your preachin' and go back to your books. I ain't interested."44
"I'm not gonna go until you get off of your lazy ass and do some god damn45
work!" Heather put her foot down. Andrew looked on in shock, he never expected quiet, meek Heather Holsworth to have an outburst like that. Growing angry, he shoved past her, striding off into the opposite direction.46
Persistently she followed him, unwilling to let him get away with it this47
time. At first it was just about her Geography grades but now it was48
personal. Andrew spun around and glared at her.49
"What do you want from me woman?" He threw his cigarette to the floor and50
crushed it with his black, spiked boots, "And while you're telling me that,can you also tell me how the hell we get outta here?"51
Heather looked around and suddenly realised that she no longer recognised52
this part of the woods.53
"Good point. Where are we?" She said, slightly afraid.54
"D'uh, if I knew then wouldn't we be back with the other's by now," he55
mumbled, "This is all your fault! You couldn't just leave me alone could56
you?"57
"It's not my fault that you're so dumb!" Heather retorted, hands on her58
hips.59
"I was doin' fine by myself. But you had to come along being teacher's pet and now you've got us lost!"60
"I'VE got YOU lost?!?" She blinked in disbelief at the sheer arrogance of61
this guy.62
"Yeah well, it ain't gonna help us just standing around talking about63
this. Here, let a man handle this. I'll find the way out." Andrew marched64
forwards, leaving a stunned Heather to reluctantly follow.65
After a while Heather began to notice that the canopy of trees above them66
was becoming thicker and it was becoming darker and darker in the woods.67
"Um, HELLO. Don't you think that we're going the wrong way?" She tapped68
Andrew on the shoulder.69
"Did I ask for your opinion?" He spat back.70
"I'm pretty sure that this isn't the way out. Look, we must be going71
deeper into the woods. The trees are thicker."72
"Says who?"73
"Says me," She stopped and frowned, "why don't you just try using those74
little brain cells that you have left for once in your life and take my75
advice." Heather turned and began to walk in another direction.76
"Hey. Hey. Where are you goin'? No way am I trustin' a girl to get me out77
of here."78
"Fine. Stay here and get even more lost," Heather shrugged. Andrew finally quit his moaning and this time she took the lead.79
After about an hour of walking they stopped for a break. Andrew sat down80
on a nearby rock and lit another cigarette. He offered one to Heather but81
she shook her head.82
"Those things will kill you," She sniffed.83
"Really?" Andrew said in mock surprise, "thanks for the info."84
"No problem," she replied sarcastically.85
"Geez. are we in some deep shit or what when we get back," Andrew grinned, changing the subject.86
"Yeah I can just imagine Mr. Barker's face going all red and puffy - the87
way it does when he gets angry."88
"And then he'll go 'Mr. Holt, Miss. Holsworth, where the devil have you89
been? How dare you disobey school rules!'" Andrew impersonated their90
teacher, "then he'll give us a weeks detention no doubt."91
"Oh no," Heather looked mortified, "I've never been in detention before!"92
"Welcome to my world," Andrew smiled and stood up. Heather noted that he93
actually had quite a nice smile.94
"Hey what's that noise?" Andrew strained his ears. Heather listened in95
silence. There was a trickling of water in the distance.96
"The river!" She cried.97
"So what? It doesn't mean that it's the exact spot where our Geography98
group are."99
"Okay, if you actually did you homework and studied the map then you'd100
find that there is only one river in this area. Therefore, if we follow the river south then we should eventually reach our class or the main road. Either way, we're out of here," Heather said smugly.101
"Well Brains, let's get a move on then because the faster we get out of102
here, the faster I get away from you!"103
"I second that," Heather glared.104
The two of them then began to walk towards the sounds of the water.105
Heather stopped at the top of a steep hill.106
"What are you waiting for?" Andrew frowned, edging down the hill. Slowly,107
Heather side stepped down. All of a sudden she slipped on a patch of mud108
and caught her ankle on a rock.109
"You OK?" Andrew called back to her.110
"I'm fine," She said, not wanting to show weakness to him. But she wasn't111
fine. Her ankle had been badly scraped and blood began to surround her112
wound. Heather also feared that her ankle was twisted. Grabbing hold of113
various branches she began to carry on.114
" I haven't got all day!" Andrew yelled, now at the bottom of the hill,115
"hey, are you sure you're alright? You've got a pretty bad limp there."116
"I'm FINE!" She shouted back through clenched teeth.117
"Whoa, I was only asking. No need to be so moody - careful!" Andrew118
watched as Heather slipped again. He climbed back up the hill and steadied her.119
"That's a nasty cut." he noticed and wrapped his arm around her shoulders.120
"I don't need your help," she attempted to shake him off.121
"No offence but you weren't exactly making great progress on your own," he supported her as they went back down the hill.122
"Thank you," she mumbled, giving in.123
They walked in complete silence for a while but then things changed.124
Slowly, Heather and Andrew began to talk to each other like normal human125
beings. 'Almost like we're.friends', Heather thought. Surprisingly, she126
discovered that she had quite a lot in common with her worst enemy. They127
both liked the same films, particularly horror and had similar tastes in128
music, although she didn't approve of his thrash metal bands. They also129
both played the guitar and had annoying little brothers. Heather actually130
found Andrew to be an interesting guy to talk to. In addition, Andrew was131
astonished to find out that Heather was much more then the studious132
bookworm that he had thought her to be.133
After much walking and talking, they had made their way along the river134
and eventually reached their group. As expected, Mr. Barker was furious and yes, his face did go all puffy and red and yes, they did get a weeks135
detention. Although Heather didn't mind spending a week in detention with136
Andrew. As Mr. Barker then patched up Heather's leg, she watched with137
disappointment as Andrew went back over to his friends who were lay on the grass. 'Nothing's changed'. She thought, sadly.138
Minutes later, Heather sat by the river's edge, relieved to be out of the139
woods. However, she also felt like something was missing.140
"Need any help?" Andrew stood behind her.141
"You're going to help me? Me, the swot, the brain box?" Heather laughed.142
"Look, I'm offering. but don't mention it to them, okay," Andrew motioned143
towards his friends.144
"Don't worry. it's safe with me," Heather smiled, pleasantly surprised.145
"Alright what do you want me to do? You're the boss," He grinned. Heather146
instructed him on the basics of what their project involved and they got to work.147
"Well I never." Mr. Barker said to his student, Kara, "Mr. Holt and Miss.148
Holsworth. working together?"149
"Very strange, sir." Kara agreed, watching the pair of figures in the150
river.151
"Hey.um. when this is finished, do you...er... wanna come to my house and we can type up the results?" Andrew asked, uncertainly looking into her eyes.152
"I'd like that," Heather smiled back at him. And at that moment, standing153
in the middle of the river, she realised that something special had taken154
place.155
Author notes
A really corny story that I wrote for a creative writing course when I was in my first year of college. I prefer writing for a teen audience. I then reworked the original story. I think that this one may need more work but I'm just going to leave it as it is.
What did you think? Please comment!
Comments
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Hey thanks for the comment and noticing the mistake (I've sorted it now.) I too feel that the ending is a bit rushed - when I first wrote this story this was not the original ending - I actually re-wrote the ending for my second draft and so I think this is the reason why it seems rushed... but it's definitely something to work on! Thank you again for reading
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great
Although I agree that the story is corny, I enjoyed reading it. :-). It kept me interested and entertained - compelling enough that I had to finish it. The ending seemed a tiny bit rushed, but that might just be me.
Also, I'm not sure this makes sense...
"Minutes later, Heather say by the river's edge, relieved to be out of the woods."
I'm guessing it's a typo and you meant "lay"?
Overall, a good read. Keep it up!

