Oh How Wrong We Were to Think That Immortality Meant Never Dying

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Grr. This story had to be taken off the site because of the incest.
*tears*

Author notes

The title is from a MCR song named 'Our Lady Of Sorrows'. And the narrator was never named because I could never think of a name I liked for him. If you have any ideas please tell me.

This might spark into a chapter series starting at the memory the older brother has at the beginning and takes them to were they are now. But I doubt it. I'm lazy

I think the story is pretty good but then again I might be wrong so please tell me what you think.

Please tell me what you think

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  • dreamwriter666
    August 18, 2007
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    i liked it. you should do more. it would be well worth reading.

    great job

  • mysterydragon
    July 23, 2007

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    13 years? how old are these kids?
    i really do like the story though. i was a little confused until the end when he talks about stopping his father.
    great write.