Origami Poets

Watching their words fold together

Creating swans of beautiful poetic rhythm

With flapping wing of synonyms, rhymes, and lines

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  • Veritaserum gold member
    July 28, 2007

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    Very creative!

    I don't think I would have thought of this. I had no idea what to write for this prompt...lol, so I think you did a wonderful job with it! Great work!


  • Asfand gold member
    July 23, 2007

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    I'm grinning from cheek to cheek! This is sort of the thing I was looking for! It's brilliant, full of imaginary and, well, it's very beautifully penned! Nice job!