Have you ever stepped in my shoes and seen life through my eyes?
Have you been neglected
Until you could finally speak for yourself?
Have you heard your parents
Shouting day and night
While never understanding what the fight was about?
Have you been hated and outsmarted
By your older brother
Who seems like a genius to you?
Have you ever been dumped by someone
Because he/she thought you were using them?
Have you loved someone with your everything
And been hated with their everything?
Have you seen life through the eyes of a loner
And made friends on the internet
Because no one could or would understand you in real life?
Have you ever punished yourself
Because you thought you weren't good enough?
Have you ever wished that you would just drop dead
And attempt to live peacefully on the other side?
Have you ever wished you could be someone else?
Have you ever wished you weren't so different?
Have you ever wished you could go back and change something?
Have you ever wished you could go back
And do something you hadn't before?
Have you ever regretted your birth?
Have you ever questioned your existence?
If you have, then you know how I feel
And if you haven't...
Well, that's a different story.
Author notes
I'm not sure this is exactly what you were looking for, or if it was at all what you were looking for =^_^=
I did not write this poem as specifically as I would like to, but I think certain things are best left unsaid.
This is pretty much summing up my life in words that hold such meanings that few would understand. I guess so far in my life I've felt lost, confused, neglected, and then loved, wanted, and cared for after something else happened that I won't mention
I guess, all this described in one word would be;
Madness♥
A contest entry
- Your Life by Taylor Renee.
100 points, ended September 30, 2007, 20 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next story in this contest, remove from contest - 1 Vs 100 by asthray.heart.
3135 points, ended November 27, 2007, 71 entries
Silver trophy winner
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Do you like it? ^_^
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Yes, yeah I liked it very much! =D It was a lovely poem, and I understood how you felt on most of the questions. I wish you good luck!
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aww..
this was a very touching poem and i feel that i can somewhat relate to it..it shows the stuggles that people go through during life..
well done!!!
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Aww Kurai
Im finally getting round to reading and this was so sad, pooor thing I hope things are better for you now this just touching
Made me wanna hug you!
Tnks for entering hun, im half way to me mark
~Ebb.
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Wow, I just saw your title and decided to read it, and I saw my entire life summarized into a poem. I'm basically just commenting to give you an a applause and tell you that you've done a great job!
Thanks for the read!
♥NewGuy90
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Wow
Thanks so much ^^
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Thanks
But now that my free Gold membership's gone...so is the picture >.<
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Wow. It's very powerful. I was nearly crying by the end. I'm sorry honey. *hugs sis*
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Thanks
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This was really great.
I've seen, so far, people like making their life fit into a poem for my contest. I think that's awesome, and I love to read poems.
I love this. It was so beautiful, and all the words you used to described how you've felt...it was just a beautiful poem because of the way you wrote it and what was inside of it.
You followed all of the rules
you're the first person to sum the whole thing up in one word. And that was a great choice, you did wonderful.
I just...this really got me to know the real YOU. That's what I'm loving about this contest.
TRhank you so much for entering, great job, and good luck.
xoxo
Tay
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Thanks ^_^
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Wow, this almost made me cry. I can slightly relate to this...you wrote such a wonderful poem and it touched my heart. Good job.
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I'm glad you liked it Thanks for reading ^_^
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