You made me smile so much
my head folded inside
out
You stretch me in everyway
it is possible to be
stretched
You fill me all up
though I never knew
I was empty
Everytime
you are gone
I feel like an old balloon
*Pffft*
Author notes
*Pffft* is supposed to be the noise a balloon makes as noise escapes it.
I have boobs and a pussy, and not the cat kind.
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Comments
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Awww.
This was sweet to me. I liked it a lot!
Haha tha analogy (?) with the balloon made me laugh
Anyway, nice job!
Thank you sdo much for entering my contest, good job, and good luck!
xoxo
Tay
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Hee hee! I giggled at the sexual innuendos here. The short sweetness makes it better.
Beautiful fillings do make you feel moist and used afterwards. And condoms are like baby balloons.
I wanna feel my head fold inside-out.
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