Your arms around me tight, my heart fluttering. I felt like nothing could go wrong. Your lips against mine, I just closed my eyes and got lost in you. I felt like this night could never end.
The credits stopped rolling, the tape coming to an end. The screen turned blue. But we didn’t pay attention. We were too caught up in each other.
I got mad. A glare from the kitchen reflected in your glasses. I couldn’t see your eyes. I gently pulled them from your face, revealing a set of beautiful brown eyes. I laughed at myself, setting your glasses down on the table.
I pushed my lips to yours and you took me deeper. Losing every trace of thought in that moment.
I never wanted you to leave that night but you left something behind. And for four months, I’ve hugged your sweatshirt to me as I sleep. It helps me to remember you; it helps me to remember that night.
Author notes
Hehe. True story ^^
Do I believe in fairytales? Love is a fricken fairytale, honey. And I even wonder how long I can keep a relationship. This is the longest one yet and gosh, I pray it'll last forever. But if you want to know if I believe in fairytales? "Happy endings are stories that haven't finished yet." No, I don't believe in fairytales, love is my only exception.
PS. Option 10.
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Awwww this is sooo sweeet!
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^_^ That's so sweet. I got a bit confused at the bit about the kitchen glare. Overall, I really like it.
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This is sweet, but I see you didn't follow some of the rules...ah well. This is under option #10, right?
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Yes. I just now got the chance to put them in, sorry for the delay.
x Julez
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awww this is very sweet. congrats on going with him for four months.
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awww.. that was sweet. I like true stories like that! thank you for entering!
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Awww. This is a great story, I really liked it. Just enough detail without going overboard. I can tell you're a minimalist, I like that.
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ohhhh for tender im really into the tender love-ie stuff at the moment ya know those nice warm fuzzies you get...yup *sigh* makes me wish i had a boyfriend.
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lol..it IS cute! I could just picture the whole thing!
i'm such a weirdo...anyway great job!, nicely written ..thanks for entering!!
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Aww that is just too CUTE!!
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awww! that's really well written... and cute because it did mean so much to you and the leaving bit was really upsetting =[ though it was a great write... it almost took me there to what was happening... again, great imagery. well done!! =]
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I gotta say this is sad, particularly the leaving part. But the fact that your first kiss was so special and the happiest moment in your life was very sweet.
beginning: 4, language: 4, plot: 4, ending: 4, dialog: 4, characters: 4.
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