Part 1: Love Is Such A Pain

She held her side. A strong pain went through it as a cold wetness seemed to form from her slowly. She stared into the eyes of her love, her tormentor. His evil grin scared her, she turned her eyes from him, as tears began to fall helplessly from her green eyes. He grabbed her chin and forced her to look at him. "Why the tears love? Its only a little cut, nothing major," He said as she saw the raging madness in his eyes, a fire that would only be seen in her dreams. "A...a...little cut.....you stabbed me with a knife you sick..." he silenced her lips with a fierce kiss. She attempted to push him away, but she felt the cold blade against her stomach, slowly going down to abdomen. "You shouldn't have been with him, you shouldn't have slept with him. This would never had to have happen if you were loyal," he said angry. "Loyal? Loyal?! You bastard, I'm not with you any more, I am with him, I never was with you, you and your ridiculous fantasies!" she spat. He moved the blade into her skin and made a little cut. "But you were with me, you promised to be mine..forever, yet you dare go off with that freak of nature! That...that disgusting rat!" he yelled and threw her up against the wall. "Now its time to feel pain ,love, lots of pain," he whispered in her ear as he smirked........1

Author notes

lol, noooo, not another story part! I didn't even add on to my other stories, stupid microsoft thingy, my dad really need to add that to this computer so I can at least open my files, they won't let me use their computers, if I could I's take my stories and put them in wordpad and send em to myself, but I can't cause 'I got my own computer and don't need to be on theirs'. somone tell if I should continue this and my other stories, thank you

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  • EmptyMelodiesx
    August 1, 2004
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    this is really good. Kind of short but I know it's only a part of something. I have to catch up with my friends poems. I like this it's really visual. Great job. ~[]V[]arissa

  • forevrluvJB
    July 31, 2004
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    wow, i like this, i havent read your others, but his one is good, im intersted in seeying what will happen, so yeah write some more of it,