Will you take me by my hand,
And lead me out of this place?
For I think I'm going fast,
Without any escape.
Please help me I'm drowning into a sea of broken tears.
I want all my hurt, and bad habits to disappear with my fears.
Please help me I'm drowning,
In all his broken love.
He lies, he hurts, he cheats, he steals,
And thinks that's not enough.
I just wanna go back,
To the normal life I had,
Full of love, respect, devotional romance?
Is that so bad?
You were the one person I always thought about.
After what I thought was true love,
Was just a way out.
How stupid was I to leave you hanging,
On a false goodbye,
That now I regret saying.
I figured out he was one big lie.
Please help me I'm drowning,
In all his broken love.
He lies, he cheats, he steals,
And thinks that's not enough.
I just wanna go back,
To the normal life I had,
Full of love, respect, devotional romance,
Is that so bad?
Is that so bad?
A contest entry
- Lyrics of Any Songs by Yume no Megami.
137 points, ended August 31, 2007, 14 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Well done!! Ahh i like the sentences that you placed. It jsut flowed so well. Kind of sad and melancholy but that's what i like about it! A well done piece!
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I think that would make a terrific song! It has a good chorus, rhyme scheme, all of that stuff. The only thing I noticed is that when you typed the word "i'm", it's supposed to be "I'm". Good luck in the contest!
*Frozen Angel*
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