If I Was A Flower

If I was a flower,
I'd be a gleaming rose mixed of all colors.
Waiting for some lonely lover to pass me by,
Then turn around and pick me up,
Realizing, just maybe I will save his relationship.

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  • Shiki
    December 11, 2007

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    Wow short and sweet! Definately a nice Poem I can put myself in the position as if I'm a flower haha that's wonderful!


  • Mallig
    November 15, 2007
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    This is lovely, and so sweet! I love the hopefulness of it.


  • Asfand
    July 21, 2007
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    ooooohhhh!! nice imagery!! very good job!!