If I Was An Angel

If I was an angel,
I'd be forever glorious.
Taking gods wonderful people up over the clouds in the sky,
Where Jesus will greet them,
As I lay them at his feet.

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I entered this into a contest, no more than 5 lines for any of you who are wondering why it's so short.

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  • Asfand
    July 20, 2007
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    The fourth line should be polished, it seems choppy in flow. Other then that, i liked the entire thing! It was very nice and sweet. The background really blends well with the serene words you used in describing everything. Very good imageyr and images! Nice job! Thankx for entering and good luck!