Imperial Chronicle
Leon Imperial is a 21 year old scientist that has created a surprising amount of high tech inventions for such a young scientist. He was the perfect mixture of brains, and brawn. Leon stands at 7ft tall, and weights about 311 pounds, and has dark black spiky hair with blue eyes. Everything was going perfect for Leon Imperial until one day his luck ran out.
Leon was busy working on a teleportation device unaware of a former co-worker in the room heading toward him. The former co-worker was out for revenge. Leon had fired him a few days ago for pocketing money. As he got ready to test the teleportation device the co-worker knocked him down causing the teleporter to malfunction, and sapped Leon into a strange dimension. Leon black out as he fall 20ft down and hit the ground hard. He remained unconscious for a few hours before coming to it. When he finally came to it, it was around noon time. Leon woke to find himself in a dense forest, filled with strange looking oak trees.
The teleporter was no longer in his hand; instead a map was in his hand, instead of the teleporter. Leon unrolled the map, and quickly scanned it; there were a lot of strange landmarks marked on the map that he never saw. Along with the strange landmarks, were the locations of a few of his inventions including the teleporter. According to the map the teleporter was at least 25,000 miles away from where he stood.
“It probably is best to fetch another invention first before I try to get the teleporter” said Leon to himself as he scanned the map for the location of a closer location
The nearest of his invention was located a few miles deeper into the forest from where he stood. The device was called the Solar Gauntlets, which are capable of generating tremendous heat, and energy into the point of contact from a punch.
The forest were he was, was known as Goblin Forest. “Retrieving the gauntlets shouldn’t be so hard” said Leon thinking of the description he heard about goblins.
Leon heading off not knowing that the description of what he heard about goblins was dead wrong when it came to the goblins of this forest. As Leon continued on he scanned the forest for a glint of gold, which would probably mean the gauntlets were near. He spotted the gauntlets high up in a tree a half an hour later. As he approached the tree a huge muscular green creature stepped out from behind the tree. The creature was huge a goblin.
The goblins of Goblin Forest were nothing to laugh at since they stand at 10+Ft, and can weight nearly a ton. They can easily crush a boulder with their bare hand without breaking a sweat.
“If you want the gauntlets you will have to fight me” said the Goblin Itching for a fight
“If that my only option then I accept’ said Leon as he took out a strange device from his pocket and prepared to fight.
The goblin charged Leon hoping to finish this battle quickly. As the goblin changed Him, Leon changes the strange cube like device into a pole and used it to lift himself up into a nearby tree to avoid the attack. The Goblin couldn’t stop himself in time and smashed into a tree. The goblin slowly peeled himself of the tree, leaving an imprint of himself in the tree.
“Being up there will not help you any” said the goblin really pissed of from hitting into the tree.
“Being up here has helped me more already then what you think” said Leon
pulling the gauntlets down from above his head.
The goblin just laughs thinking that a pair of gauntlets couldn’t change the odds of him winning. The goblin was to busy laughing that he didn’t notice Leon getting down from the tree. Before the goblin knew it Leon was right on top of him.
“This battle is over” said Leon as he let lose a fury of punches.
He had landed ten punches on the goblin before he had stop hitting the goblin. The goblin remained standing still after all those damaging blows.
“That didn’t hurt one bi…..”Said the goblin as he passed out as red spots begin appearing at the points that the punches had mad contact.
“Now were is the next one” said Leon looking at the map.
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strange
a strange story a few gramtical errors and i felt that it moved too fast -
Good Job, though to me, your writing is strange, but dont mind that, my brain is still recovering from the trauma of maths.
I'm looking forward to the next up date
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Nice, intriguing idea! Good job, though they're were typos and grammatical errors. Nothing to waorry about though, it happens!
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Good Job
This was a good story. Interesting idea, I saw a couple of run on sentances in the beginning. Some comma's were missing and stuff, a few words missing from the sentances. But other than that a good story. Loved the idea and loved the character. Bravo!
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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Thanks for pointing out that i have errors in the story. I will try to correct them as soon as possible.
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