To my friend

When times are hard,

And friends are few,

I know I can count on you.

When tides are strong,

And I am drowning in sea of doubt,

I know you are there to pull me out.

When tears run riot,

And I give up hope,

When there is no one to whom I can turn to,

I know I have you.

You’re my friend, my savior, my lover,

You’re my guiding angel.

You’re my passion, my happiness, my desire,

You’re my soul mate.

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  • Clary--Selene--Tayy gold member
    February 13
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    thank-you for your entry i will be reviewing all of the finalists momentarily!

  • ZackTruel
    September 28, 2007

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    Very pretty poem! I loved the description you gave of your lover, and I really liked that you used some rhyme in it. I miss the old days when most poetry had rhyme and rhythm. Most of the poems I have seen in this contest and on SW have neither. Good luck on the contest.


  • Cari Cullen
    August 27, 2007
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    okay

    that was good ....good luck


  • Anaya Roma
    August 24, 2007

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    SMILES

    I have a soulmate too and he is all that you describe here. It was he who helped me stop seeing myself as the most unhappy person in the world.
    Anaya Roma


  • emmalucie71
    July 26, 2007
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    Very Good

    I liked that. I have a very good friend too.


  • Frozen Angel
    July 24, 2007

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    I like it, it is a very comforting poem and it is realistic so a lot of people can relate to it. Good job and good luck in the contest!

    *Frozen Angel*


  • Taylor Renee
    July 21, 2007
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    This was so sweet.
    The rhyming was good, and overall I really liked the structure and style of the poem.
    And it was soooo sweet how you wrote it for him (about him) and I bet if you show it to him he'd be impressed and really happy
    This was really nice though. I liked it a lot, great poem!
    Thanks so much for entering and good lcuk in my contrst!
    xoxo
    Tay

  • Taylor Renee
    July 21, 2007
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    This was so sweet.
    The rhyming was good, and overall I really liked the structure and style of the poem.
    And it was soooo sweet how you wrote it for him (about him) and I bet if you show it to him he'd be impressed and really happy
    This was really nice though. I liked it a lot, great poem!
    Thanks so much for entering and good lcuk in my contrst!
    xoxo
    Tay


  • Taylor Renee
    July 20, 2007
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    *cough* add author's notes then I can comment *cough*


  • Veritaserum
    July 19, 2007
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    Very strong sentiments here... you express your emotions well.

  • erectmeonit
    July 19, 2007
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    I loved the composure of your poem . All the best!

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