Careless
Feelings lost
Simply overlooked
Wanting
Not needing
Just fearing
He wishes some
She wishes more
They see confusion
It's an illusion
Lack of communication
Lines are broken
Wanting more
Acheiving less
There is a circle
Where everyone sits
There is no center
No focal niche
He looks right
She looks away
They all look somewhere
But there is nothing seen
Grace
The crowd
Crowding
The circle
Feeling
Fish
Let down
A purpose
The circle once had
Now no more
Too many times
The cirlce wandered
Members forgot
What it meant
To be together
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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GREAT
This is very heart felt piece. It flows naturally.
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, characters: 5.
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