I dreamt I was a dream
In the actions of every human soul
Waiting to be reached,
Forever.
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♥
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I dreamt I was yours
In your warm embrace and surrounded by your love
Awoken by my solitude
Suddenly.
Author notes
Well, I just did this for the fun of it ^^
I don't expect to win or anything, but writing poems makes me think and get something down on the computer and if others like it, who am I to argue? I hope Mr. Asfand likes it =D
A contest entry
- Windsparks by Asfand.
225 points, ended July 28, 2007, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
How is it? ^^
Comments
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Mr.Asfand......hmm....well.....he LOVES it!! brilliant job, i loved what you did here, especially with the first one!! excllent!
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Thank you very much!
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Pretty. I love the second to last line, "Awoken by my solitude." It speaks to me so much. I often dream I'm in my lover's arm but awake to find myself alone. I can relate well. And I find your first stanza very intriguing. I would have never thought of something as such. Good luck, my friend.
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Thank you very much ^^
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very interesting. I do hope, you win though.
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AHHH!
Of course my Prince is going to love it!
Who wouldn't??
This was really beautiful. Suh a great idea, you pulled it off beautifully
Great job! And good luck!
xoxo
Tay
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Why thank you my sexy ballerina
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