Confession Ch 1

It had been a long day at work and Jayne felt exhausted. The kids in year eight had been playing up last lesson and she had felt ready to explode. It always got like that towards the end of term and having the class from hell last period on Friday was not the most enjoyable experience. Quickly she gathered up everything she needed for the weekend, the marking could wait until Monday, and got in the car. 1

Driving home it was as if she had left the world of school behind and entered back into her own life again. She wasn't Miss Magorian for the weekend but was Jayne, free to be herself. As she entered the flat she threw down her bags on the corner, peeled off her clothes and took a nice long hot shower. Washing away the stress of the week she began to think of what excitement might lie in wait for her this weekend. 2

As she left the shower she wrapped a towel around her hair in that silly little style her mother had taught her as a child and wrapped her fluffy white towel around her slender body. She move to her desk and sat down. 3

Turning on the computer her hands began to tremble, her heart beating faster as she waited for it to boot up. For some reason today it seemed to take forever to get past that annoying blue screen but finally Jayne could click on her screen name and start on todays adventure. 4

It had been going on now for over a month and was becoming more exciting as the days went by. Quickly she logged into her email account and waited to see what lay there for her. Skimming through the junk she came to the mail she was waiting for, the mail she had dreamed about all day. Pausing for a moment she savoured the fact that it was there before clicking on that little box ... "read". 5

As the words appeared on the screen Jayne felt her heartbeat increase. 6

“Hi Jayne, How are you doing today? I’ve been thinking of you and I know you’ll have been in that shower before reading this. Mmmmmmmmmmmm……… love D” 7

That word “mmmmm” is a word Jayne loved to read as it told so much. She once asked what it meant and the answer she got  was that she would have to wait and see. Just the thought of that did something to her body that she couldn't explain.  Then whenever she read it  her heart fluttered like a thousand butterflies taking off and her body quivered with a need for pleasure. It was only a short message but it was enough to set Jayne’s thoughts and mind into action. How could she reply? What should she say? 8

She’d known Darren for a few years and they’d always been great friends but now it had become something more. Their friendship had developed through the times of trouble they had shared together and how he had helped her in so many ways. As her counsellor he had stood by her in times of crisis and been the strength that she needed. As they grew closer though they had started to trust one another more and their honesty became more real. It had all started as simple jokes which didn’t mean anything. It was just harmless flirting … nothing serious. They’d put a stop to it once but the feelings had started to grow. Now it was more than harmless fun but what’s commonly known these days as an ‘internet relationship’. Only two things really stood in their way. Firstly his job and secondly the fact he was already married with a child.9

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  • Feline2001
    August 2, 2004
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    grrr get writing girl! I can't wait for this to be updated!

  • freewill
    July 30, 2004
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    defininitely will be more to come..no fear there.. lol watch this space


  • July 30, 2004
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    really good story i really enjoyed reading it. wonders if there will be more chapters to come and if there are please let me know.
    Pendragon

  • Feline2001
    July 29, 2004
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    ohhh this is getting better and better-some beautiful descriptive writing contained inside! wow i love it.

  • freewill
    July 29, 2004
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    aww thanks hon.... i don't know why i got the bit about the towel.. it just sort of fell into place.. lol

  • IrisUnseen
    July 29, 2004
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    oo wow. intriguing! please continue the story so that i may see how it all plays out. this is deff going on my favorites list! hehehe....

  • Nour Beydoun
    July 29, 2004
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    Can't wait to see what you're gonna come up next..
    Good descriptions.. I liked what you said about the towel on her hair.. reminded me of me and my mother..
    Good job
    Nour-

  • RoughRider
    July 29, 2004
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    Its getting very interesting to read, ponders

  • -Reality-
    July 29, 2004
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    I like the start of this ^_^. Thanks for sharing.

    Kami

  • Feline2001
    July 29, 2004
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    lol i think (am I right?) I get the drift of this! Really nice write so far-can't wait to read more!

  • freewill
    July 29, 2004
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    lol thats the idea.. hee hee

  • RoughRider
    July 29, 2004
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    Excellent

    This is just a teaser, now I can't wait to see what kind of mail she has waiting!

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