Goddess from the water

So far away

under the water

so close to the light

If only I could have touched it

I didn't even care if I would've gotten hurt

I'll wait for you until you slowly drift to sleep

dreaming in your silky,pure white cocoon

surely to metamorphosize soon

even if I've grown up

I'll still love you now and forever

So if you want help

Let's seek help from the goddess from the water

So far under

the surface

far from the darkness

near the locked door

Who has the key?

Can the darkness get through?

Please I'll do anything to get to you

I'll wait for you until you slowly close your eyes

dreaming in your silky,pure white cocoon

surely to metamorphosize soon

even if you grow up

I'll still love you now and forever

So if you want

make sure you go to the goddess from the water

it isn't the end my friend,but

it isn't the begining either my close friend,but

you are my lover until the end

this child,alone,alone

past midnight he watches the sunrise

before midnight he watches the sunset

Will he wander to the goddess from the water?

(maybe)

but will he find his answers?

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  • virusoutbreak
    July 17, 2007

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    Good, really good

    I really enjoyed this it was really well written and alot of imaginary. I love the flow of this. Good work.


  • Taylor Renee
    July 17, 2007
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    *cough* Can't read till you read *cough* whole contest *cough* read, then message me *cough*