So far away
under the water
so close to the light
If only I could have touched it
I didn't even care if I would've gotten hurt
I'll wait for you until you slowly drift to sleep
dreaming in your silky,pure white cocoon
surely to metamorphosize soon
even if I've grown up
I'll still love you now and forever
So if you want help
Let's seek help from the goddess from the water
So far under
the surface
far from the darkness
near the locked door
Who has the key?
Can the darkness get through?
Please I'll do anything to get to you
I'll wait for you until you slowly close your eyes
dreaming in your silky,pure white cocoon
surely to metamorphosize soon
even if you grow up
I'll still love you now and forever
So if you want
make sure you go to the goddess from the water
it isn't the end my friend,but
it isn't the begining either my close friend,but
you are my lover until the end
this child,alone,alone
past midnight he watches the sunrise
before midnight he watches the sunset
Will he wander to the goddess from the water?
(maybe)
but will he find his answers?
A contest entry
- Poems Please ENTER ALL! by Taylor Renee.
450 points, ended July 30, 2007, 19 entries
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Comments
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Good, really good
I really enjoyed this it was really well written and alot of imaginary. I love the flow of this. Good work.

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