Dark Gory Truth

Society is like patience on a smiling at grief. Things are not what they seem in this world of glitter and gleam and advertising. Society is a sinking ship tottering unstable and nodding to its fall.  It is no yacht or floating palace.  This ship called society, is tottering down, down, unresistingly submitting itself to cool, temperate waters.  It's fall of the curtain for certain.  We're stuck in the mud and rolling in the mere just like the wicked who drowned in the flood of Noah's day. Like a candle flickers just before it dies; the flame of love is dying. The world is evil-favored marching to its end. Like the Devil, Satan; it will have to bend.  Overload of knowledge doesn't help our race. Everyone is wearing mutilating utensils in their face and walking around looking like chickens. If they can't see it. They can't peck it. A famine is happening in peoples' minds. It comes from the evil spirits of the air--demons!1

People are worshipping Satan and become like animals--blood-sucking varmints. Casinos and bingos fill their pockets while skies fill with probes and rockets.  Although the dragon is admired; his power won't last.  People are becoming known by his number and his name as foretold.2

If they don't get out; they will suffer the plagues. There will be no haven or harbor nor place to embark; no light or electricity; just the dark. The race is run to its bitter end. Six Sixty six is counterfeit and sits with the angel of the darkest pit. This leaves God's creatures sad.3

People need divine rescue and there is help for the human race. A light is flashing in this tunnel of cloud and gloom. But not all will find it. The handwriting is on the wall and this is your final trumpet call.4

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  • August 6, 2004
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    Chilling

    Chilling write. So sad and true. We as a society are sinking. Husbands killing their pregnant wives, mothers killing their children, murder for greed. Can there be any hope or promise. It is always darkest before the dawn. Well written.


  • Jcsketch82
    July 30, 2004
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    As tieed and darkwrite said, I like this piece, it's truely a great dark metaphore...this is a great write..good job.


  • July 29, 2004
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    This is really good, and it almost scares me...I never thought a christian piece of work could be so dark...I mean if i got you wrong i dont mean to offend you...its just awe..im in awe of this...so dark..

  • tieed
    July 29, 2004
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    Nice!!

    This is pretty good! hehe I really like it and the metaphore is even better. I really like some of the imagery/symbolism you used, which I guess goes hand and hand with the metaphire, still this is really good.


  • July 28, 2004
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    this is really a great poem/prose!! I LOVE LOVE LOVE the metaphore!!! cant say that enough! this is totally awesome!!! Thanks sooooooo much for entering and supporting what we're doing!!!

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