Jimmy's Prespetive- Chapter 17 Lover's Prelude

Wow, what crummy luck!  My date for the prom suddenly   dumped me out of the blue yesterday to go  with someone else.  What am I  going to  do with this extra ticket  I just can’t put a fifty dollar ticket to waste. Maybe I’ll ask Dianna .  Hopefully she’ll say yes.1

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  • March 1, 2005
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    A bit awkward I think. First time he mentioned another girl, so this make Jimmy a cheater, which breaks my heart...lol NO NOT REALLY.
    I was wondering what the next date would be.
    I also see that you have no chapter 18 so I will wait until it is posted to go on.
    You should be proud of yourself for your great work.
    ~J

  • Samplette
    February 18, 2005
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    OH, I am so excited that he is going to ask Dianna to the prom...I sure hope she doesn't have a date already...and he better pick her up at the door...lol

    S♥m