Chapter 161
Dianna couldn’t believe how much fun she’d had with Jimmy on Friday night. She was really hoping that he would ask her out again soon. During lunch Dianna excitedly told all her friends about her date with Jimmy. “ So do you think he’ll ask you out again?” Abby asked “I don’t know but I’m sure hoping so.” Dianna said as she crossed her fingers underneath the table The bell rang signaling the end of lunch and Dianna headed off toward English. When she arrived there she noticed that they had a sub. “Good afternoon Mrs. D’ambrose is dealing with a family emergency and will be out for a few days. I’m Ms. Andrews and I will be filling in for her.” Dianna looked at the agenda on the board and pulled out her weekend homework. After homework correction it was time for scene analysis of the scene they’d had to read in A Midsummer Night’s Dream over the weekend. Then finally it was time for creative writing. She pulled out her creative writing notebook and went to the section marked Private and wrote the following poem:2
You are so beautiful to me3
Oh my darling can’t you see?4
I’ve loved you from afar5
For the longest while6
I was lured in so quickly 7
By your charming smile8
We get along so well9
Eventually we’ll make a great couple10
This I can tell11
You’re so amazing on your electric guitar12
You’ll always be my shining star13
I love you Jimmy!14
She then flipped to the non-private section of her notebook and wrote a few nature haikus and other random poems. Then the bell rang signaling the end of class and Dianna moved on to her sixth and seventh period classes as if she were floating. All she could think about was Jimmy and hope that sometime soon he’d ask her on another date. 15
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A bit hum-drum, but not bad. The back made it difficult to read, but highlighting took care of that. Still holding my attention.
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OUCH!! This has the hardest to read background and font yet...but highlighting did the trick.
This is another section where, in my opinion, "and wrote the following" didn't need to be there...it is a given that she wrote the following...ya know? Still....all good.
S♥m
If I am bugging you, you can just tell me to shut up...but I am really into this, and just pointing out a few things..
