Back To Reality

I just wish that i knew you'd be with me,
but silence has taken away my dreams,
if i take your hand will you try to see,
the world that i want you to have,

now the world sees me as a man of grief,
just trying to forgive myself,
but never will you give me a chance,
to tell you about the pain i've felt,

now you make me start to believe,
that we have a future,
and that we can make this pain relieve,
and end the torture,

i know you make me see things brighter,
make me know that i'm not alone,
i wish i could tell you that i love ya,
and that i want you to love me,

i don't know if the world thinks your too great,
and i don't really care,
because to me your everything,
and without you i'd end up dead,

the world starts to crumble around me,
as you walk away from my life,
but you know that it doesn't make me grieve,
because i'm determined to get you back,

now the world stares at me,
as if i'm condemned,
and you make me believe,
now theres no turning back,

i want you to know that i love you,
and i hope you love me too,
now i'll show you why i care,
and why i see you everywhere,

i know you make me see things brighter,
make me know that i'm not alone,
show me the path to my own self relief,
let me know that someone cares,

silence in my life,
keeps me away frome strife,
if you could only see,
what you've done to me,

now the world stares at me,
yet i still believe,

please take my hand,
lead me through this land,
lets make a stand,
against those who hate me,

now you walk away from my life,
leaving me to deal with my strife,
all the hatred from you is left in me,
taking me back to reality,

Author notes

A song that I wrote for a person who I basically was in love with at the time. But this was just before she broke my heart which is where I got the name from. In a way when she broke me I was brought back to reality.

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  • Midnightmare
    July 15, 2007

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    is this about... umm... well, you know who..? (author's notes)
    anyway i thought it was really good. good work! <3


  • LadyLionnir
    July 14, 2007

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    Wow...very strong as well. I liked the idea about being brought back to reality by something that usually never has a positive effect on ones life. Good job, I liked this one, too.