Self Disgust

I see my face in the mirror
Only to vomit in self disgust
Just wishing to severe my
Head, arms, legs and spine

Peel of my skin
See who I really am
Pitiful mortal
No wonder god despises you

Bleed my body
For gods demand blood
But never
Will I turn to their side

Vomit at the sight of me
Death will always follow me
For I can never be
One of them

Peel the skin
Sever the head
Bleed the heart

Self disgust
Self disgust
Self disgust

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from when i hated myself

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  • LostShadow silver member
    July 26, 2007

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    Wow, you can't say much about this poem because it is so deep and close to most people. In a way I can relate and in others i cannot.

    Nicely written and I do hope that you don't hate yourself anymore.

    Keep up the great work

    Emma

  • Mirror Me
    July 15, 2007

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    I hope u don't hate urself like that anymore.
    It's dark and I think it's very cool.. even if I don't really understand poems or lyrics for that matter..

    God job.

    /S


  • LadyLionnir
    July 14, 2007

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    Wow, very strong. Hatred toward oneself is never a good thing, it leads to more problems like the ones you spoke of here. Good job...the poem didn't rhyme but it had a flow that kept me reading.