Battle out of Hell

See the heavens torn apart,
Blood rains from the sky,
Demonic power reigns over god,
Hear the screams and cries,

Kill the angels,
Skin them alive,
Cut their wings,
Eat their flesh,

Battle out of hell,
Raised upon the earth,
Demons fly,
Angels die,

The slaughter worsens,
The dead rise on earth,
Killing the living,
Devouring all,

Fire rises,
Burns all the land,
Kill the innocent,
No judgement from hell,

Advance into forsaken land,
Devour all the light,
Crucify every one,
Look at the gruesome sight,

Battle out of hell,
Into the forsaken land,
Light is devoured,
Darkness reigns again,

Fire burns the victims,
The screams a lullaby,
Bring the children out to see,
How they will die,

There is no god anymore,
His world is now ours,
He will never control us like he did again,
And now we all devour,






Battle out of hell,
Burn all the living,
Battle out of hell,
See them all die,
Battle out of hell,
Nothing left to destroy
Battle out of hell,

Nothing is left,
Apart from the barbaric scenes,
All heaven torn apart,
And set into flame,

No more screams,
The lullaby ends,
And now we see,
Darkness take the land,

Battle out of hell,
Burn all the living,
Battle out of hell,
See them all die,
Battle out of hell,
Nothing left to destroy
Battle out of hell,

Author notes

An old song that I wrote when I was in a small band thing. It sucks but oh well lol

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  • caitecola
    July 17, 2007
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    It doesn't suck. I think it's good, a bit dark and depressing, but good.
    C.E.


  • LadyLionnir
    July 14, 2007

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    This does not suck! I think it was amazingly well-written, flowed and made sense. The utter darkness of it captured me in. I mean, no one really thinks about angels dying, you know? Well...good job!!!