Immortal I roam this earth,
My heart is lost,
My soul not found,
A Blind guardian, I serve you all.
Far, far beyond the outer reaches,
I dance in the twilight zone.
Far, far outside the wall,
Your war rages at itself.
War has become immortal,
Never stopping, never dieing.
Never resting, never in peace,
A blind Guardian, I fight that war.
War has become apart of your life,
Of which you live in total ignorance.
Your people are being killed and destroyed,
Yet you live in total ignorance!
Heed my warning you can not win,
If you continue to live like this,
And for now I dance in the twilight zone.
Now is your chance, you must stop this.
Author notes
An abstract try at a world problem
A contest entry
- ABSTRACT by Midnightmare.
200 points, ended September 16, 2007, 40 entries
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once again, i liked it. lol. i think the fact that it didn't rhyme was good, because i think that if it did, then it would almost take some of the meaning away. well done on a great piece!
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