Chapter 21
Written From HER to me2
It was a hot and humid night. The breeze coming off the ocean was cool to the skin. The sky looked as if it could rain at any moment. The evening had been wonderful so far. The night before magical. He had given his all to the women whom he loved. They were walking hand in hand. Quite, the only thing you could hear was the roar of the ocean. Up ahead was the most beautiful formation of rocks, standing tall. She was curious, and wanted to see. They walked until they were there, in the middle of what seemed like a dream. They were all alone in the world, blocked off from any view but what was right in front of them. She took her wrap from around her waist and laid it on the ground, so they would have a place to sit. She sat between his legs resting her back against his chest. She could feel his warm breath on her neck. He held her in his arms to try and keep the night air from her. She loved it. She felt so safe; so secure She wanted more than anything to show him how much she cared. She turns her face up to him for a gentle kiss. How she loves his soft lips. She turns and is on her knees, between his thighs, and holds his face in her hands. She smiles, knowing she is shy, but wanting so badly to show him what he showed her the night before. She pushes him onto his back in a playful manner, trying to keep the mood light, but wanting so much more. She pushes his shirt up slowly from his waist, her nails tickling as she goes. He pulls it over his head for her. She rolls it and puts it under his head. She tells him to just lay there Watch her It starts to rain, just a hard sprinkle. Big drops of water hit his chest, his smooth skin. She takes her mouth, while looking in his eyes, and gently licks each drop off as they fall. His skin is so hot. Her eyes never leaving his. She kisses each rib. One by one. Her hands caressing him softly. She moves to his neck, he wants to touch her, she moves his hands, places them above his head. She takes her halter-top from her. It is soaking wet...her skirt and panties next as she stands over him. The rain has stopped, but the air is thick. Her heart is beating so hard. She moves to his lips... She nips at them, then his eyes, she kisses them closed. She can feel his breath, so hot, so warm on her cool skin. His neck, his ears, she gives each her undivided attention. She moves slowly down his chest, wanting to know each curve each bone intimately. Her hair moving over his skin as she moves. Tickling. His stomach muscles tighten under her mouth; he tenses, wanting more. She looks into his eyes once more, a smile on her face. Her fingers undo the button of his shorts, slowly revealing his warm skin beneath . Unzips and slides them over his hips She kisses his hipbone, a small lick out lining the bone. As she removes his clothing, she slides her body over his. Every nerve inside her on edge, tingling. She kisses his quivering muscles working her way toward his erectness her lips touch him for the first time. So smooth and hot. Her mouth circles him as she takes him in to the wetness and warmth of her. Her teeth nip gently at him playfully. Her tongue on him circling him tasting him. She moves over him slowly, over and over, sucking, licking she can feel him swelling .. ..he wants to be inside her. Her hands feeling him, caressing him. He can feel her hair softly moving and tickling as she makes love to him with her mouth. She feels him move, shift, she looks up moving her hair to the side so she can see his face. He grabs her shoulders and pulls her up to him. She tells him no, this is his night, but he moves hi s hands to her waist. and lifts her over him, placing his manhood near her moistness. They both tremble at the feeling, both are wanting so much. She slowly takes the tip of him in her heat. He pushes at her waist wanting more but she wont let him. Slowly she moves down on him pushing wanting all of him deep inside her. Her head back She just wants to feel the moment .The breeze on her skin taking him in as much as she can. So deep, so hot. She begins to move her hips slowly, grinding, up and down wanting to feel everything all at once. He grabs her waist and rolls her over onto her back, and moves inside of her with such force she claws his back, wanting, needing. She can see the desire in his eyes as he moves, his hands on her breasts. The soft sand beneath her begins to give and move beneath her. He pulls out and rolls her to her stomach. He lifts her to her knees by her hips and slowly reaches around her to her breasts; she can feel him next to her back. He caresses her back, her hips as he enters her again, trying to build both of their desires. He holds her hips as he moves inside her pushing wanting, harder, she needs more wants more. Over and over her warmth sucking him in deeper. Her need building so strong she begins to cry, her tears are of love and passion. He rolls her to her back kissing her tears as he enters for their last moment of bliss. They reach the point of ecstasy together. Both shaking with desire, drained from feelings they cannot explain. They lay there in each other s arms for what seems like hours. He picks her up and walks her to the waters edge and rinses her of his sweat and his seed, the cool water on their skin, the breeze. They walk back together still in the circle of their love. He kisses her gently loving her, both telling their love for one another. The only sounds are of the wind and ocean as they drift off to sleep under the stars in each others arms....3
What did you think? Please comment!
Comments
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Most awesomely passionate and so tastefully erotic! Dang! I know of a man in Florida who I just HAVE to be with now!
WOW! I love your erotic writes! Very very well done!
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Excrutiating pleasurable read.
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how i did that?..what i'd do? lol
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thas so cool how u did that..humm u cold give me some i=hints on writeing
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Nothing has brought about these memories for a very long time.
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i didn't write this...she did
( long distance pen pal...while i was stationed in japan )
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Damn!
Well thank you for the flashbacks. This definately triggered a few memories that have a way of truly turning up the heat over. Now I know not even a cold shower is gonna help....thanks
Blessings
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Very, very, sexy!
Nicole -
Beautiful. Sexy. HOT HOT HOT!!!
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What words are adequate, none I can find, very moving.
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u still got 3 more chapters to go after this one...
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The two of you are going to kill me. LOL
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