Secluded,
Delicate,
Oh, so secret,
Muffled murmurs,
Puzzling,
Wondering...
...whispers.
A contest entry
- Ten Words - Poem by Asfand.
175 points, ended July 28, 2007, 31 entries
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10-word poem? I'm not that poetic, but I gave it a try! Tell me what u think
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Good job, I saw visions of children hiding inthe garden among the flower bushes watching their older sister's first kiss. It is the words that bring us together.
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Cooooool
this is very nicely done! greast job!
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thank u
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wow!! IMqueen ur ruddy brilliant!! i love it!! this is soo cool!! its very ambiguos!! wow!! i'm wowed and amazed!!
u exactly made whispers and well...this was amazing!!
u shud change the oh-so-secret to oh, so secret.... that'd way you'be complete o words perfectly!! this was great!! luv ya!! -
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Thanks!! ur too kind *takes a bow* This is the first poem I've ever shared on the net, thanks for the nice comment! I'm rite on the oh-so-secret thingy!
Luv, IMqueen
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