Artists' brush, creating dreams. Each flowing graze heightens inventiveness. Just knack, learning many new opaque portraits. Questfully reaching standards thought unattainable. Vexed with xerostomia, yet zestful!
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OK.....that was hard! LOL
A contest entry
- Simple as A B C by DustyOldHalo.
525 points, ended July 14, 2007, 18 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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*curses* I'm so jealous of you! Yours is way better than mine, and yours makes complete sense! *throws a tantrum* Awesome entry, I would've given this one a trophy.
♥NewGuy90
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It makes sense maybe, but i think its boring! Yours was way more funny! And quit the tantrum, or you dont get a lolly.
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that was tough but it turned out awesome
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Wow.
Not only a story but it turns out it's a great poem too. IF this was put into a different format, it WOULD be a poem.
Good luck in the contest!
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Ha ha, very cool indeed! I loved it!... You managed to keep a lot of coherecy.. and that is difficult.
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LOL yeah, it is really hard! I had about 10 drafts before this one, and they made no sense what so ever! LOL
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Nice story!!!
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Nice!
This is cool! You did a great job, and it actually makes sense too!! (unlike alot of these...lol. But the ones that don't are still really funny and make ya laugh at least.) lol.
I really like that yours actually says something sensible, and artistic at the same time. It IS fun mental challenge, isn't it?!
Well done!
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My darling mouse what a wonderful and enchanting pice of writing you have written you have managed the imposible and write something inspiring and creative, though you write so wonderfully it will never compare to how truely special you are, i love you my little mouse XxXxX
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LOL!!!
This seems like a very good one. Are you going to make me look up xerostomia or tell me what it means? The rest makes sense and seems pretty good which is frightening.
Andy
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Good point....um.... xerostomia means 'dry mouth'..... what an awesome word it is! LOL
And, yes, it is rather scary how it seems to almost make sense! LOL ;D
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