Wild rabid dog

A bipolar Canadian dog etched fangs grievously hither into Jake’s kneecap. Lingering, my newly opposed pet queerly ravished segments that unscrupulously vanish with x-rated yelping zealousness.

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Tell me if this doesn't make any sense to you. Then I'll know I'm not the only one!

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  • So Strange Greeters member
    October 5, 2007
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    This was interesting, but answering your author notes: I do understand this. I thought you did a good job on describing such a short sequence of an idea.

    Seems to me that you have a high talent and I look forward to reading your longer stories when I have more time.

    Keep up the great work!


  • The Imagined
    August 13, 2007
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    Oh, that makes perfect sense.

    (And, baffled, Carla doesn't entirely fathom.)


  • Unpredictable Lover
    August 12, 2007
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    Wowzas....Thats a bit strange


  • EmeraldDreams
    August 9, 2007

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    This is great! I tried one of these for a contest, and it came out all serious and snooty! This is just plain funny and crazy! I loved it! I spent half and hour going through a dictionary looking for an x-word that I could use in mine


    • NewGuy90
      August 9, 2007
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      Thanks for reading, commenting and applauding, I really appreciate it. Glad you liked it, the contest seemed fairly easy but it became a real tongue twister when I couldn't find any suitable X and Z words!


  • M a b e l
    July 11, 2007
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    Jeez am I jealous! While it isn't A material, it's understandable why.


  • On.Cue
    July 10, 2007
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    lmao
    weirdly enough...
    this makes sense X.o
    Haha nice creativity dude. =D


  • Blu3Rose
    July 10, 2007

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    holy crap! that made more sense than if i would have done the abc thing. ( great job!
    loved it! even though it didnt make that much sense! lol

  • Fragments Of Dreams
    July 10, 2007

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    well, then...

    hmm...bro ( ), first of all...you're NOT the only one. I kinda misunderstood. Very short, make it longer, maybe?

    Your sis,
    chel


  • JuliaAlexandrovna
    July 10, 2007
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    It makes sense to me ^^ caz Hato has a good imagination XD

    I like it!

    x Julez

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