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Days are countless until they are numbered.

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Just kinda thinking after a great deal of death surrounded a few of my friends. It's true. We think of our lifes as almost infinite until someone says 'it's terminal'.

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  • Asfand
    July 16, 2007

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    Pessimistic but deep and meaningful. I would never want to think of my life this way. Death is a perosnal issue, different to everyone. some knwo it going to come - someday, sometime. Other think it could come any moment - today, this minute. Few don't dont like to think about it - now or then.

    This was very deep and filled me with a very fearful feeling. We are going to leave this world someday! It's a very scary thought. What lies ahead?

    Excellent job! Thanks for entering and good luck!


  • Kari gold member
    July 13, 2007

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    Yeah, I do agree with you here though I've never thought of it like that before. I wish you the best of luck in the contest


  • sodancewithsoda silver member
    July 11, 2007

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    Shelly, it's me again ^_^
    I love this.. because it's so true. FOr me, the past month has been filled with death, too. (Actually, the past half year has been filled with death, lmao). WHy can't we appreciate things as they are? I mean, do we have to be told one thing is "limited" for us to appreciate things? then again, that;s human nature.. "you don't know what you have until you lose it" - cliche, but true ^_^

    I'm just thinking.. "days don't count until they are numbered" might have the oomph you wnat? then again, this is just my opinion

    Good luck with the contest, Shelly! see ya soon!