"What's your pleasure?"

I breathed in his scent and smiled, imagining how he would taste. Would he taste like all the rest, sweet long-meat, not unlike that of pork? Or would this one be different, would this finally be the one. I fear there isn’t much time to delay with this one.1

“What’s your pleasure?”2

“Mmm, pardon?”3

“Would you like pretzels or cookies for your in-flight snack?”4

“I’d kill for a scotch on the rocks.”5

“I’m sorry I’m only handing out snacks at the moment, the drink cart will be by in a few minutes. Are you sure you don’t care for a snack?”6

“I’d love one,” I say with a sly wink “maybe you can help me out later.”7

“Um, oh.” He says with perfect understanding as he nods his head to the rear of the plane and flashes me his five fingers as he mouths ‘five minutes’. 8

I nodded, and gave him my warmest smile. I really hope this is the one. I haven’t eaten long-meat in months. I felt my self-control was fading fast, my powers diminishing. This is going to be a huge risk to take with the flight attendant, someone is likely to find the half eaten corpse in the bathroom before we land, but I’m willing to take the chance. I have no choice. It’s either eat, or die. Survival of the fittest, only the strong will survive, and all that jazz.9

I place the complementary ear-buds back into my ears and dial up Radio Head a little louder to drown out the noises around me. I run my tongue over my teeth feeling the sharpened points and begin to get excited. I finish listening to the rest of ‘Morning Bell’ and it is time for my date. I look down the aisle and catch the male flight attendants gaze. He nods for me to go ahead and as I begin to stand up the Captain’s voice comes over the loud speaker.10

“Good morning folks, this is your captain speaking, I’m going to be turning on the seatbelt sign and request that everyone return to their seats. We are going to be coming up to some turbulence shortly, so you may feel the plane bounce around a little, but don’t worry it won’t last long.” 11

He was right, the bouncing didn’t last long, and neither did the 30 000 foot decent at 500 miles an hour into the side of the Rocky Mountains.12

I looked at the flight attendant and shrugged as if to say ‘oh well maybe next time’. The look of hurt in his eyes, assured I would still get my meal after all. He motioned me to go ahead; as he looked around to make sure the other attendants were busy. As I passed by him to enter the unoccupied bathroom I ran my fingers down his bare forearm and saw him shiver. I entered the small airplane washroom and licked my fingers. He did taste good; maybe this will be the one after all.13

In my career as a cannibalistic contract killer, I have consumed the better part of 43 men, 24 women and 12 children. Not only have I made millions, but I have also stumbled across an age-old secret that, other than the tribes that continue to practices cabalism, no one else may know. With each victim, I not only absorb their knowledge and life energy but also seem to gain extra powers. I feel with this next assignment I may just be granted the power of the gods, invincibility. 14

There is a light tap at the door and I open it to let the flight attendant in.15

“So, hi.” He says shyly.16

I grab him and pull him close to me, placing my lips over his. He hungrily kisses me as I even more hungrily bite his lip, hard, drawing blood. Before he even has a chance to scream I have pulled away with his lower lip in my mouth and begin chewing.17

“Mmmm” I say smiling, showing my sharp pointy teeth as his blood drips down my chin. 18

A look of horror contorts his face, and as he begins to scream the plane begins its sudden unexpected crash landing. We are thrown to the roof of the bathroom by the g-forces of the airplanes decent. I continue to rip shreds of flesh off his face and neck, and his blood curdling screams match those of the rest of the passengers that are also facing their death.19

My feeding frenzy doesn’t last long before everything goes dark, then extremely bright and hot, and then nothing but quiet. I open my eyes to the cold mountain air caressing my naked body and stand amongst the debris of airplane and human bits.20

As I walk away from the flaming ruins of the plane, and make my decent down the mountain I can’t but help smile as I lick my lips and still taste the sweetness of my last meal.21

Author notes

*Written for a contest*

I decided to use all four options for this contest:
#1 D. A passenger in a crashing airplane.
#2 B. Cannibal
#3 D. I breathed in his scent and smiled, imagining how he would taste....
#4 "What's your pleasure?" – Hellraiser

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  • liljd726
    August 21, 2008
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    wwo o.0

    this was a good story but damm that was sick and wrong at the same time lol

    beginning: 3, language: 3, plot: 3, ending: 3, dialog: 3, characters: 3.


  • KixiusMaximusArsus
    August 21, 2008

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    Wow that was interesting I love the description you give in this, and how you word everything. It was really a very good story, a little gross but very good. Great job!


  • Valkyrie silver member
    August 20, 2008

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    Mmmm...some people really are good enough to eat!
    That was really twisted, man. But you write twisted so well!
    I was puzzled as to why she let him scream and stuff; she couldn't have known the plane was crashing, right? Not at first anyway.
    Also, in P14 you put cabalism, when I'm pretty sure you meant cannibalism.
    Kudos for finding a way to stick all of those options together in one story. That's awesome.


  • Bells Kelly
    February 13, 2008
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    interisting
    wow
    umm... that was really well done!


  • Toxic Paradox
    November 15, 2007

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    Very nice =]

    That was incredibly interesting and my only criticism is that sometimes you seem to slip between past/present tense.

    Thank you very much for entering my contest.

    -T.P. xxx


  • Ms. morrow
    October 21, 2007

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    OMG!  Spectacular, escalating, climatic gore. This could be Chapter 1. of an incredible novel. LOVED IT! Ms. Morrow


  • B Chandler Greeters member
    October 21, 2007

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    Commentary Opinion

    The only editing that you could do is your usage of verbage (I.E. present and past tense language). Below, is the corrected paragraph of paragraph nine [9]-- anything marked in red is the corrections.

     

    I nodded, and gave him my warmest smile. I really hope this is the one. I haven’t eaten long-meat in months. I felt my self-control was fading fast, my powers diminishing. This is going to be a huge risk to take with the flight attendant, someone is likely to find the half eaten corpse in the bathroom before we land, but I’m willing to take the chance. I have no choice. It’s either being eaten, or die. Survival of the fittest, only the strong will survive, and all that jazz.9

    But other from that, the images given were strong, vivid, and seemed 'life-like' in reading this story but will say that the opening paragraphs felt 'adult contented' (just my opinion). Keep it up

    B Chandler,

    Greeter

     

    beginning: 3, language: 3, plot: 3, ending: 2, dialog: 3, characters: 3.


  • Delfishie
    July 10, 2007

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    lol

    Oh my god! That is SOME interpretation of the different options. LOL.

    I really liked this. The whole backstory behind your main character is fantastic. He needs another story about him. The entire idea is just fascinating and even made him surviving the plane crash a plausible, yet awesome ending.

    Good job with this. The only criticism I have is the lack of physical description of your main character - hell, for a minute there I thought he was a girl until I remembered the 'sir' line.

    Great job, nonetheless. I really enjoyed reading this.

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