If things are moving too slow,
Things are moving at the right pace,
Why are we all in hurries,
To finish first in this large race
We all want to fall in love,
And be with the love of our lives,
To where we can all build families,
With the perfect husband or wife
And someone once had told me,
Why are you in a hurry kid?
Let things move a little slow,
And for once I finally did
And the thing is I'm happy now,
Because I've found her, dont you see,
And I realize that taking your time,
Will help you find your meant to be
We have alot of great memories,
In this time sent from up above,
But I realize that taking your time,
Is the key to a succesful love
Yes, realize that taking your time,
Is the key to a successful love
Author notes
Hope everyone enjoys especially you Taylor!
A contest entry
- I'm bored. ...Are you? by Taylor Renee.
350 points, ended July 26, 2007, 21 entries
Honorable mention
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
My Poem!
Comments
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Yes!
I totally agree with the message in this poem. Everyone goes out looking for love when in reality, it will come to them. Fantastic job, I love the poem. I also love the fact that you've made the poem realistic. (of course that's obvious, but I just thought I'd restate that...lol)
*Frozen Angel* -
THIS WAS SO GOOD!
I loved this. It was really really well written and the flow was great.
You did such a nice job, this is definately a finalist!
Great job, great luck and thanks so much for entering my contest!
xoxo
tay
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