Love is like candy. It may be sweet, sour, or all together repellent, but it's always an expirience, and if it's good, you'll never want to forget it.
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eh. Idk...i wish i was smarter when it came to stuff like this. part of a poem i wrote.
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This is really good! I liked it a lot and I think that you did a great job. I wish you the best of luck in the contest
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I like it!!! But wishing you were smarter? You already are, I mean love is like candy... Well, I dosn't tast like it because Love can be sour, spiteful and mean it can be tastless and cruel... That would be quite good acctually!beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 3, ending: 3, characters: 1.
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