The Wolf Awakens

The Beast From The cold Suburbs Of the far North arises With The Scent Of Blood,

Quickly He Sores Through the Air Claws Digging into the Sludgy Mud,

Snow Flake infested Trees Hide the Moonlights Beauty Unable to Silhouette The Beast,

Faster He Gallops Like a Mighty Horse, Flem Covered Jaws from The Thought Of His Feast,

The Stench Of Human Flesh Lingers Close, Does He Not Know They Are Heavily Armed?,

In Sight He Leaps From His Rough Cold Paws, His Chalky Fur Waves Franticly In the Frost Bitten Wind,

Claws Emerge, Steel Coated, Knife Edged, Claim His Victim By Neck and Thigh,

Bringing Him To His Knees, Fiercely The Beast Mutilates His Victims Face With His Piercing Teeth, Helpless The Useless Corpse Lies Guts Claim Nearby Bits of Land, Pieces of Flesh String From The Rotted Branches, Facial features Distorted Amongst The Beastly Act,

Fur No Longer Friable, His Coat Fuming With Innocent Blood, Matted Together With The Passionate Color Of Love, the Beast Lives to tell the Tale to His Yet to Be Kin, Keeping the race Of Savagery Alive, Ready To Claim Another Innocent Soul Awaiting To Be Re-leaved To The Heavens And Hells,

Away He Slyly Creeps Now a Mere Shadow Amongst The Fog, A Trail Of Paw Prints Allow Men To Know a Tormented Beast Has Walked The Forest Realm, Until they Capture the Beast For Is Guilt He Lives On.

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  • Midnightmare
    July 10, 2007

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    oh wow this was awesome. (i am coffincorpse from youtube by the way)
    i really liked the description and detail used in this... well done =]


  • EmeraldDreams
    July 9, 2007

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    Wow! What a vivid piece, so full of description and power! I really enjoyed this one.
    Welcome to Storywrite, I hope you have a great time here!


  • DarkRainFire
    July 8, 2007

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    This is a wonderful story. I love it so much. You write so well. I love the background and the picture also. Keep penning I am sure to be reading.


  • Stegofreak
    July 8, 2007
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    No problem. I used to spell that wrong alot myself.

  • Stegofreak
    July 8, 2007

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    Nice story, well written. Just looking at line six though, do you mean phlegm (sticky fluid secreted by the typhoid membranes of animals) when you wrote flem?

    • Gorefetish
      July 8, 2007
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      Gorefest

      I Did Mean Phlegm Simple Spelling Mistake Thankyou For Viewing.

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