Lies

A man cant do what he is not meant to do,
Even if he is meant to.
History has taught us so,
For you must enter a room to destroy it.

Destroy it
Destroy it, destroy it, destroy it.
History has taught us so,
For one was heard on the sword.

The Singing Sword the Singing Sword!

A man can never do what he is meant to do,
Even if he really wants to.
History has taught us so,
For the lamb that ran away showed him not a burning tree

History has taught us so.

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  • Prodigious.Mirth
    September 30, 2007

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    what a fabulous way to determine and express a sense of abract opinions on lies- and I love the way you repeated destroy it.. it dug so deep into how the anger inriched this peice


  • Midnightmare
    July 21, 2007
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    *has already commented* but this is a great piece, well done =]

  • Midnightmare
    July 8, 2007

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    very deep... so true... i dont know, i just like it. lol. repetitive-ness was good... like a song, really.
    good work! =]