three poems

<,Thoughts ignored, opinions dismissed
the toungue dies
the black void deepens.
The detachment expands
Such bitter sweet torture
to save those around me.>




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  • Asfand
    July 9, 2007

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    hm..this was very powerful.......it was very dark and brave and cool..i liked it alot,.........thnc for entering!!!