I've fallen down a rabbit hole and I'm in a dream now; it may be fake but at least it's perfect...
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this is a quote i made up right before i fell asleep the other night. I love dreaming(its my escape when life sucks. that and writing) and i love the concept of alice in wonderland.
much love pplz!
~Elena aka that one russian chick!
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- Self - Quotes Haven by Asfand.
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at least its perfect.
thats what we want... people who dream.
Imagination is better than the old boring reality. But we need to separate those two sometimes in order to protect ourselves.
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Yes i agree. I am most happy when I'm in a dream. great job on this quote!! Keep writing!!
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lol this was so cute, I totally love it
full of imagery, and I think we can all relate to this one. I wish you the best of luck in the contest!
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This reminded me of two things- the Matrix, and Alice in Wonderland. I really liked this, and I agree with you completely.
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Hmm, I liked the irony of this one. Even though it’s fake at least it’s perfect. That was really excellent. It gave me the feeling that what your trying to say is that the “dream” is better than reality, which sucks. And that reality in a way has let you down, or something in that line? (I suck with deep and meaningful stuff!) I liked that you alluded to Alice in wonderland! Thanks for the great read and good luck in the competition.
♥NewGuy90
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yeah, i do mean that my dreams are usually better than reality. i usually have a good imagination so my brain almost always comes up with amazing dreams. its not that my life is bad, its just that my dreams are a lot better
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Thanks bunches for the comment!!!
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hehe....that was sooo cool.........its very nice....u chose a different topic and did it wonderfully.........it was cute ya noe, the way the author seems liek a toddler lost in his own world of perfection!!! yay!!!
cool!!!
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