All alone,
by her side,
kissed a tree,
as she said good-bye.
One and One
she marched alone
Out the came
the tears she had never shown.
Day by day
week by week
they thought it was a game
just like hide and seek.
She climbed a tree
for one last time
now you'll see her in the sky
She was the star that never shined.
Please tell me what you think
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Interesting poem. I like all that it symbolizes, but the rhythm seems a little off beat, the last line always seems a bit too long.
I dunno, maybe I'm just delusional from being tired or something...
Nice Job, though!
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Aw, I really liked this. I did notice something spelled wrong though (I know, it's a first right)
The line "She climed a trww" I'm guessing you ment tree and you spelled climbed wrong. Don't worry, you where just having a Maranda Spelling Momment. You will return to normal in a few momments.
Where did you get insparation for this?
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