Hi, my name is Santanna Hardy. I am 16 years old. I live in Aberdeen, SD. This happened about 2 years ago. I was sleeping and all of a sudden I had a nightmare. I dreamed that I was at school. That was scary enough, but it got scarier. I dreamed I was in Science class and we were doing nothing as usual.
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A contest entry
- Just Come and Take a Look by LadyLionnir.
500 points, ended July 18, 2007, 18 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think about the beging of my story.
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Welcome to SW. Is this a start of the story? Or is this the completion? It needs more details and things..It is good as intro but you could use more details for sure..but overall like I said it is a good start
Good luck in the contest!
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Is this suppose to be funny? It kinda seemed like the character was making a joke...it made me laugh. Very good so far, lol.
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Good so far.
I think that it still needs a little work. Keep up the good work.
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