When he gives you the red rose
What do you think
Do you think your in love
Or do you think this isn't true
You feel ugly to be with such a good looking guy
When he gives you that first kiss what do you do
Do you say thanks
Or do you say I love you
You feel no love or no connection.
What do you do
You go to your best friend
But no help
You go to your mother
But she tells you to make your own desicion
Well now you have to tell him
And put him in so much pain
He loves you,but you don't
You have your eye on someone else
What do you do?
Just remember that if you don't love him its over
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Comments
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I loved this! haha close to home so it was good to read. I liked how you wrote this sounding confused like a person in love really is. I liked how you ended it with "Just remember that if you don't love him its over" that is so true!
Thanks very much for entering and goodluck!
Keep up the great work
Emma
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I liked this poem. It is realistic and I like that fact. Also, it can teach you a lesson about to let go of someone if you don't want to really be with them. It reminds me of a new show on T.V. called "Side Order of Life". Have you ever seen that show?
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No I haven't seen that tv show. but i know its on lifetime
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