Jimmy's Prespecitve- Lover's Prelude Chapter 12

I asked    Dianna on a date.    She was really excited about it, We are going to see a movie on Friday night.  I hope to get to know her better.1

This should be fun.  I really like her  a lot. She is so adorable!2

Author notes

sorry  Jimmy's chapters are shorter than most of the other chapters   i guess you could say he's not much for words

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  • February 28, 2005
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    I like the last line. "she is so adorable" Not too many boys/men would use that to describe a girl/lady. It is a great compliment if they did...better than sex pot or the such.
    ~

  • Samplette
    February 18, 2005
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    Well, since the story is mainly from Dianna's perspective is good reason for her chapters to be longer. I really like the idea of you adding his side the way your are. It's pretty neat.
    S♥m